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gizzangsta rappin

Postby Rain Matrix » Nov 15th, '09, 01:39

hurricane winds yeah my Flows like that
narcing out others I don't Roll like that
this is a takeover I'm a take Control like that
lighting the next blunt cuz I Smoke like that
now that I'm all in everbody Knows like that
yeah I'm all in watch everybody Fold like that
if I was the devil I'd have your Soul like that
deception is weapon it would be Stole like that
trust me homey my heart is just Cold like that
the haters don't like it cuz I'm Dope like that
and I'm all by myself cuz I'm a Rougue like that
I'm revolutionary meaning I could Loc like that
start shit and I'm gonna have to Unload like that
dealy force yeah I'm a hit your Skull like that
I'm a playboy for real fuck how a Bitch Feels
she needs to swallow me or keep her Lips Sealed
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Re: gizzangsta rappin

Postby Just Silver » Nov 15th, '09, 20:30

i love when rappers stay on the same rhyme forever
i know exactly what you were trying to get across and the overall piece was interesting and got my attention
spottin :y:
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Re: gizzangsta rappin

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Nov 15th, '09, 20:34

idk but i guess you was cassidy influenced on this... :whistle:
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Re: gizzangsta rappin

Postby Arabian Shady » Nov 16th, '09, 10:07

thats a nice concept man, liked the flow to this
Keep em comin
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Re: gizzangsta rappin

Postby lilrossy » Nov 17th, '09, 15:11

nice drop man, i liked it.
Rain Matrix wrote:I'm a playboy for real fuck how a Bitch Feels
she needs to swallow me or keep her Lips Sealed
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Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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Re: gizzangsta rappin

Postby MCyobi » Nov 17th, '09, 17:44

Nice stuff man
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