When Darkness Falls

[lilrossy]

jus anotha song im writing...

chorus: x2
embark this, the mess marks all,
sharp pain where the heart is, jus tryna stand tall,
when darkness falls... when darkness falls, uh,uh

Its hostile, fly sitting on this little childs eye,
a mother stands by, crying, god why,
children roam with ak-47's, and in reply,
they killed him, now home is heaven in the sky,
the rebels war cry, while locals cry war,
normals lifes a far cry as home's a trap door,
the midnight roar, outside, the gats are drawn,
in packs there goin, swarmin thru back doors,
children fall to the floor, while bullets are weaving,
a mothers grieving and pleading while her kids are bleeding,
vicious froces of tortures and beatings,
little boy crying for mum but shes no longer breathing,
weeping, as he comes face to face with a gun,
as much as i hate to say it but that kid got done,
a fuckin bloodshed, and the death toll grows,
prayin save our souls, but god left a long time ago.

[eminemgirl1234]

Whoa! It's like um, I can see it you know? Like, Visualy and shit like that. I'm not making any sense am I ? It's ok, be honest. I can take it... . No! Don't!

[Yah-hah]

Different pace for your stuff and I dig it alot. Nice touch the imagery was amazing. Nice rhyme scheme too. Nice peice homie

[lilrossy]

Whoa! It's like um, I can see it you know? Like, Visualy and shit like that. I'm not making any sense am I ? It's ok, be honest. I can take it... . No! Don't!

haha, tryna say it was good imagery or sumthin. anyway thanx for the feedbak.

Different pace for your stuff and I dig it alot. Nice touch the imagery was amazing. Nice rhyme scheme too. Nice peice homie

yea wanted to do sumthin different then usaul. glad you liked it man.

[Just Silver]

didnt really see many austrailian rappers on TR are there more just wondering

Back to the topic, I felt the imagery made me mad for some reason like i was into it
crazy emotions why so depressed lol

Line of choice: children roam with ak-47's, and in reply,
they killed him, now home is heaven in the sky


I always try to tell the writer my favorite line from now on

[Fa-Q]

That shit is fuckin powerful....can't wait to see the finished song....

[lilrossy]

didnt really see many austrailian rappers on TR are there more just wondering

Back to the topic, I felt the imagery made me mad for some reason like i was into it
crazy emotions why so depressed lol

Line of choice: children roam with ak-47's, and in reply,
they killed him, now home is heaven in the sky


I always try to tell the writer my favorite line from now on

yea, ive only seen 1 or 2, if theres anyone hiding, come out and represent, haha.
thanx for the feedbak man, watched a movie called city of god and got me thinkin how fucked up it is in those types of places. glad u liked it man.

That shit is fuckin powerful....can't wait to see the finished song....

thanx alot man, appreciate it.