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Call it a night?

Postby J Roc » Nov 18th, '09, 04:58

Get Four in a Bitch, How Much More Whore Can She Get?
These Chicks-Is-Beggin Cuz My "Dicks-a-Legend"...They Call it NoTorious Big .. Lmao
Roccy A Sexist Dawg & I Meant It, If We Start Boxing You Dead bitch
Cause u Get Ripped-Off When i'm "Ticked-Off" Like the Box Of A Checklist
Loook Ur Flow "Took a Blow" With the 'Right Hand' Like Pushy Ho's With Bushy Holes
Ur Girl She's-Smart She's My "Sweet-Heart" Even When Her Blood Sugars Low
Ur Bitch-Made... When Im Sober, Im About To Get-Baked Like Cookie Dough
u with ya boys...Playing With Sand Castle's, Likes Diving In The Ocean & Swam Passed It
Till u get tied to 'Heavy Metal' Like Black Sabbeth But Compared To "Roc"? Ur Wack Faggot
fuck ur Rap Tactic's Bout Crack Addict's, You Just Mad u Don't Spit Fantastic
Sorry I BackStabbed Him, pop-a-pump-& "Calm-Ya-Stomach" Like Antacid
It Ain't That Drastic If We Tried To Battle This homo "No-Show's" Like Bad Actor's
Whut Do Dawwwgy Talk For? I Always Fuckin Talk Until Roccy's Cock Sore
Think Im-Bitch If We Pop-Blows?..We Know "Roc-Show" Like live-With Ozzy Osbourne
When Ocky's On Tour ............... lol

Jussss Some keystyle'n on you.... LIGHT WORK
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Re: Call it a night?

Postby lilrossy » Nov 18th, '09, 06:06

YEESS, this is fuckin awesome man. i loved it, flowed well, great multi's, mad punchlines, and made me laugh a few times.
J roc wrote:These Chicks-Is-Beggin Cuz My "Dicks-a-Legend"...They Call it NoTorious Big .. Lmao

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great work man, keep em cummin'.
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Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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Re: Call it a night?

Postby gutawafang » Nov 18th, '09, 07:54

yeah, can see it's a freestyle cuz I can't flow to it that much. but as usual, the punches were awesome.
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Re: Call it a night?

Postby D'Leh » Nov 18th, '09, 20:35

awesome man!!! for real, structure, flow rhymes multies really awesome check ot, if you want my last drops, Wake Up and Heroin
Let me eat your pussy while I shave you!
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Re: Call it a night?

Postby eminemgirl1234 » Nov 19th, '09, 17:19

Like it.
"Sometimes I feel so alone,
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...

Malina a.k.a Mickey

"Ignorance is your new best friend!"-Paramore
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Re: Call it a night?

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 19th, '09, 19:29

Yeah the one rossy said I dig. Nice shit man. Punches on point as usual. Been a minute since I seen some new ish from you man :p Dope homie
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