Hip-Hop New Full Song

[Relapse.LP]

So Rakim perfected his craft at last...

[classthe_king]

Thanks Cole

[Tash8]

not bad not bad, but ur rhymes are kinda simple, you remind me of Bar.. dont get me wrong i see the multis, but rhymes like name game fame.. mak that make back rap that...spent lent.. hop, drop, go, blow, hoes.. ya know what i mean? those are just too common of rhymes

otherwise pretty decent man, like the emotion

[classthe_king]

thanks tash
Yeah i see what your sayin about rhymes...its just kinda hard for me to come up with different rhymes because when im writing and trying to think of a rhyme those are just the same rhymes that keep coming up in my head. I'll work on my vocabulary though

[Xray]

Flow was incredible, really good shit man. I couldn't fault anything, for what it is and what you aimed for, this was perfect IMO, except for the hook. Didn't like the simplicity of the hook, seemed like you were just talking on the hook, flow wasn't good and it made it awkward. Other then that, dope piece man. Leave this track in the vault till you get better at recording.

[classthe_king]

Flow was incredible, really good shit man. I couldn't fault anything, for what it is and what you aimed for, this was perfect IMO, except for the hook. Didn't like the simplicity of the hook, seemed like you were just talking on the hook, flow wasn't good and it made it awkward. Other then that, dope piece man. Leave this track in the vault till you get better at recording.

Thanks alot



@Relapse, you guessed it