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Challenge Randomania

Postby Just Silver » Nov 18th, '09, 00:15

Emphasize on soul if expensive i stole
Render my own of vibrant lyric traffic cones
mirror rap alone steer him or yea we gone
tries to be the don in modern renaissance
fries his handlebars electric hands hes falling off
respected plans have all been bought from a ghost tyrant of sorts
flow lined with a source of a mental path that he wants
simple graphs and a board of employees on all floors
rap grand larceny jazz fills awkwardly the montage of my "paper work" like an office be
take birth of a potpourri smelling hopeless eve that could promote the peace
or turn a "goat" to "cheese" and go after his own breed slacking with dope fiends
crack with those being so sad and lonely im the "staff" of all "kings" who gap
my own "ring" which was a rigged thing till i bashed the "hole" thing

-Very quick piece challenged myself to key when i didnt feel like it slightly written i mean SLIGHTLY lol like one line
Random meanings throughout
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Re: Challenge Randomania

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 18th, '09, 01:23

First line is the dopest but rest is dope shit too....good drop man
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Re: Challenge Randomania

Postby Just Silver » Nov 18th, '09, 01:36

Fa-Q wrote:First line is the dopest but rest is dope shit too....good drop man

your always feedin good looks guy :y: :8)
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Re: Challenge Randomania

Postby D'Leh » Nov 18th, '09, 01:36

dope shit homie dop shit!!!! very goods first lines!!! check out my new one, Heroin
Let me eat your pussy while I shave you!
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Re: Challenge Randomania

Postby Just Silver » Nov 20th, '09, 00:56

Last bump :unsure: :'(
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Re: Challenge Randomania

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 20th, '09, 18:10

Yo man there are only A few people on CW that I always checkj their stuff. Your getting there. Everytime I see you I'm like yo I'ma have to check that one out. Stay droppin big homie
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: Challenge Randomania

Postby Just Silver » Nov 20th, '09, 22:07

Yah-hah wrote:Yo man there are only A few people on CW that I always checkj their stuff. Your getting there. Everytime I see you I'm like yo I'ma have to check that one out. Stay droppin big homie

Yo i respect your work alot so this means alot to me
good looks :y:
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