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What you think of this diss? (directed at no one)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Nov 27th, '09, 03:20

who’s talkin shit the boy with a glass jaw
pick ya poison mac 10 or texas chainsaw
fucking stupid play games lose ya life
i will pillage your house and fuck ya wife
lost your mind bill youl be dying tonight
bitch think he frank lucas cause he touch a lil white
ill rape the microphone and slaughter the drum
lynch the hooks while hits make me cum
dangerous at night hope you know yo colors and gangs
sleepin on me wake up you’ll find a slug in ya brain
Afraid yet we get down like that
louisville slugga we get down that
what, want beef we down with that
five shots to your frame you fall down like that
and I aint no pussy but ill give you syphilis
ill say good night the nine blow you a kiss

i was semi-high when i wrote this, this was way back, in my prime stage
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Re: What you think of this diss? (directed at no one)

Postby Just Silver » Nov 27th, '09, 03:24

Beginning was good but then just become almost not a diss

arent u battling BILI or something?

Work Work Work and practice wordplay and Nameplay are key

liked this
"who’s talkin shit the boy with a glass jaw
pick ya poison mac 10 or texas chainsaw" :smoking:
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Re: What you think of this diss? (directed at no one)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Nov 27th, '09, 03:24

3m1n3m Silver wrote:Beginning was good but then just become almost not a diss

arent u battling BILI or something?

Work Work Work and practice wordplay and Nameplay are key

yea i am but i think i lost, check it out anyways
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Re: What you think of this diss? (directed at no one)

Postby classthe_king » Nov 27th, '09, 03:25

this was your prime?
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: What you think of this diss? (directed at no one)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Nov 27th, '09, 03:27

classthe_king wrote:this was your prime?
i never said i was great :whistle:
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Re: What you think of this diss? (directed at no one)

Postby shadeonback » Nov 27th, '09, 03:28

good til you start rhyming with that

Afraid yet we get down like that
louisville slugga we get down that
what, want beef we down with that
five shots to your frame you fall down like that
When push come to shove, I just stand up and scream “F*ck ‘em all”
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Re: What you think of this diss? (directed at no one)

Postby Just Silver » Nov 27th, '09, 03:29

classthe_king wrote:this was your prime?

A little tip for u bullet NEVER SAY YOUR IN YOUR PRIME even if you think u are
you always have room to grow and be better or people will say stuff like this..
honestly im never in my prime since i always got more shit to put in that i forgot or havent perfected
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Re: What you think of this diss? (directed at no one)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Nov 27th, '09, 03:31

3m1n3m Silver wrote:
classthe_king wrote:this was your prime?

A little tip for u bullet NEVER SAY YOUR IN YOUR PRIME even if you think u are
you always have room to grow and be better or people will say stuff like this..
honestly im never in my prime since i always got more shit to put in that i forgot or havent perfected

aight :y: i need you guys to check the battle raps me and bili made in the BR section,, thanks, i know i prob lost it, since its my first one, but just check it out
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Re: What you think of this diss? (directed at no one)

Postby shadeonback » Nov 27th, '09, 03:34

just met an old friend in detroit he told me he could promote you well, he got some friends in the radio

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Re: What you think of this diss? (directed at no one)

Postby shadeonback » Nov 27th, '09, 03:35

Just do not lead your girlfriend to the radio
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Re: What you think of this diss? (directed at no one)

Postby bullet_boy46 » Nov 27th, '09, 03:35

shadeonback wrote:just met an old friend in detroit he told me he could promote you well, he got some friends in the radio

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:o lol
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