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FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt2

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 22nd, '09, 00:27

Fuck the world with an open fist,
I'm left chokin this hopelessness into broken twists,
Frozen quick when I'm left in this winter,
I'm the second December whos a reckless offender,
I'm the resident sinner right next to his dinner,
I'm left with this splinter next to the river making my skin hurt,
I may be a winner but tonight I sleep in the gutter,
I sweep in the shutter when I screech from the thunder,
I don't see one another when I reach under my sheets and covers,
I bleed to cover the pain, wait,
Everything sounds dramitic with my mind in this faint state,
I don't understand this world and its ways,
All the pretty things from these girls to the waves,
I'm caught staring at these swirls in a daze,
I'm a squirrel in a maze unable to figure out where I should be,
I'm stuck like the chucks I wear on two feet.

Fuck the world with every ounce of spirit in my chest,
To clear it for the best you'd have to hear it in the flesh,
Just to feel it in my soul I let my spirit unfold,
Fuck this whole world is the only story that I'm told

I'm a grown man who's in need of assistance,
This world is the only problem I can't beat with persistence,
Can I leave with permission cause I really need to leave,
I really need to grieve, his death holds my breathe and I really need to breath,
So please just leave me with my pen, a piece of paper and silence,
I'm inspired by this pain and I think that you should try it,
I think that you should buy it, it'll last till infinty,
My wrath will visit me so I'll rap till ya feelin me,
When it really me who acts like it's killing me,
I laugh with this misery so I rap with such imagery,
Visit me? Yeah I bet you will,
Look I even lowered my lines so you can sit and chill,
Look look its so effortless now,
Mulits can't hold me I "F"ed the list now,
I'm blessed with this curse,
I'm left with this hurt,
I throw my letters in the shredder screaming "To hell with this work"

Fuck the world with every ounce of spirit in my chest,
To clear it for the best you'd have to hear it in the flesh,
Just to feel it in my soul I let my spirit unfold,
Fuck this whole world is the only story that I'm told

I'm usually quite calm about these situations,
But I'ma just sit and wait since it's obvious I can't take em,
I doubt that I can honestly handle wat you're tellin me,
So I'll just sit and vibe to my multi-syllable melody,
Sounds good to you but all of this is hell to me,
Shredding paper vows like I was shredding celebacy,
Well if we could just leave this whole planet,
My internship at this censorship will just bleep this whole jam quick,
FUCK is pretty much all that I can say,
Hopefully I'll be around to smile on another day,
Hell even these multis seem to be phony,
Like me they only come come when they're lonely,
On days like this all I need is a homie to say "Homie,
I know things look shitty, these issues and everyone in this city,
I know you wanna say your done tryin to be 50 but son just be with me,
I don't want you running around doin stupid shit gettin locked up again,
Living on the block gettin shot up again,
Homie I know all this shit looks Fucked,
When all of these crooks duck keep your eyes open and just look up."
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt2

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 22nd, '09, 00:32

Jus I want you to stop....you're putting the rest of us to shame lol. But damn dud the first like 10-1d bars are crazy the rest is dope but the first part is just a fuckin step up....keep getting angry goddamn it
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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt2

Postby mcZu » Nov 22nd, '09, 00:45

Multies are dope, I like the content and the chorus is dope as well. Nice job Yah, keep it up.
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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt2

Postby Just Silver » Nov 22nd, '09, 00:56

Its a never ending story with you lol 4hrs. holy shit i can barely sit through a movie
(i heard thats how long all the pages together took)

too many favorite lines but
Line of choice:"I throw my letters in the shredder screaming "To hell with this work""
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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt2

Postby BILI » Nov 22nd, '09, 15:34

Excellent job homie,as usual some impressive stuff :y: :y: :y: :y:
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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt2

Postby Slim Zaddy » Nov 22nd, '09, 18:47

nice shit homie ,,,,,,,,,, you're one of the best here no doubt ,, keep dropping bro ,,:)
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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt2

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 22nd, '09, 19:50

Thanks homies. lol grif I'm chill now but I still got e few to go :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt2

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 25th, '09, 18:41

Bump :sweating:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt2

Postby BILI » Nov 29th, '09, 20:02

awesome,I liked pt1 more but this one is dope 2,1 verse is the best,then 3rd and then 2nd,but damn dope multies :worship:
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Re: FUCK THE WORLD PAGES pt2

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 29th, '09, 20:04

Yeha PT1 and 4 are my favorites. Its the angry multies in all of them lol
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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