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Fa-Q - The Darkness

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Fa-Q - The Darkness

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 29th, '09, 11:58

For Katie its bed time,
Red rum whoops I mean red wine,
She sees the chair where the ax handle sits,
Behind it the glair of the wax candles lit,
She grabs the sheet to pull it as she's fenced in fear,
She feels the heat of the bullet against her ear,
Why you worrying about that chest pain,
Its a heart attack worry about your pressed brain,
Against your skull,
Just your luck your dense and dull,
Your a waste of flesh,
Your faces a pest,
And all I wanted was a taste of your breast,
What's that tickle? The binding of your hands and your feet are next,
Your pussyll be soakin after repeated sex,
Your lucky I beheaded my victim then slept like a baby,
Insanity set in then crept in crazy,
Ill tie you where you belong on a stripper pole,
And pushed your raped body in the bloody recyprocal,
Until the saw stops and the wood chippers full,

The darkness will soon,
Consume your carsass,
The hallways always bleed blood,
And soon your dead body will feed the mud,
And your one way ticket to hell,
Has no return address so lick it well,

It'll be a quick death Ill slice your throat,
Sing hymns accapella whether or not its the right note,
What's that your requesting amazing grace,
A timeless classic 'cept Dre's raisin' the bass,
Don't ask crazy what crazy know,
But I can you about your neck and how many different ways it goes,
Bitch you got a crooked spine,
It should be straight look at mine,
You better learn to stay calm,
Before your your bodys burn with napalm,
Wait why do you have bleeding palms,
They say slow breathing calms,
Not sitting in a corner reading Psalms,
I might let you go better turn that charm on,
Tell me how long did it take you to learn your arms gone,
Ha if height was your worst fear,
Soon it will chang to this car stuck in first gear,
Hmm what sinks better this or that thinner rock,
Aw fuck it ill just buy some chains and a cinderblock,


The darkness will soon,
Consume your carsass,
The hallways always bleed blood,
And soon your dead body will feed the mud,
And your one way ticket to hell,
Has no return address so lick it well,

Your limp lifeless body wrapped in a trash bag,
I can only tell your dead if your eyelashed sag,
Oh so I'm a killer right,
If killer is miller then I'm just miller lite,
Killing just another thing to raise my heart rate,
I'm no evil person just part hate,
I guess the final piece of arts Kate,
Should I marry Kate or smoke the ashes of Lee,
Ill cloak your car as it crashes into the sea,
I guess I'm ashamed I heard her,
But soon the copsll come and ill be blames for murder,
Its almost eleven to twelve,
Now quickly decide heaven or hell,
See the problem with hell is it has the worst stench,
You'll beg for just a drop of water to have your thirst quench,
See some people see as a rose with thorns,
When really I'm the devil with super imposed horns,


The darkness will soon,
Consume your carsass,
The hallways always bleed blood,
And soon your dead body will feed the mud,
And your one way ticket to hell,
Has no return address so lick it well,
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Re: Fa-Q - The Darkness

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Nov 29th, '09, 13:46

Awesome. Sick stuff. Now I'ma have to top that, be even sicker...
Do to others whatever you would like them to do to you. This is the essence of all that is taught in the law and the prophets.
-Matthew 7:12

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Re: Fa-Q - The Darkness

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 29th, '09, 18:43

Thanks GGGG....or G to the fourth power....and this is as creepy as I get man
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Re: Fa-Q - The Darkness

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 29th, '09, 20:00

Yeah I always like reading your crazy shit. This one sounds familiar though have you shown me this one before
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Fa-Q - The Darkness

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 29th, '09, 20:03

Yah-hah wrote:Yeah I always like reading your crazy shit. This one sounds familiar though have you shown me this one before

Yea I believe it was in Art with that Cunt Randi
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Re: Fa-Q - The Darkness

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 29th, '09, 20:05

Fa-Q wrote:
Yah-hah wrote:Yeah I always like reading your crazy shit. This one sounds familiar though have you shown me this one before

Yea I believe it was in Art with that Cunt Randi


HAha yeah I remember now. I like it though man.
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Fa-Q - The Darkness

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 29th, '09, 23:42

Thanks for the feed Jus
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Re: Fa-Q - The Darkness

Postby BILI » Nov 29th, '09, 23:49

This was pretty cool,some sick shit,I liked it,nice rhymes,flow :y:
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Postby Fa-Q » Nov 30th, '09, 12:49

Thanks BILI
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