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Postby murphmanny » Dec 1st, '09, 02:21

I have to make some rhyme for english class, apparently a rap on Macbeth by Shakespeare.

Check it so far. I'll update.

Hold on a sec
you ain’t tell me what I wanna know yet
so check the wrecked floor deck
and run your mouth like a corvette
I took over my father’s position when he died
got permission from Glamis and was a new addition to the tribe
I got pride, when I stride, outside, worldwide, I abide to these guides
I am live with these guys, I can’t describe the vibe
but inside, they lied
they said I was tied with Cawdor, but i tried
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he’s alive, powerful and rich
and for me to switch from a snitch
in a cinch, twitchin’ like kids with an itch
People thinking Ima be a king?
ya right, I can sing, I got rings, I can bring it like Hunter Ing
tell me where you heard these strange things
Oh and by the way, is there a reason why you got me at this place?
You shouldn’t be allowed in this embraced space
now ‘fore I send this over triple platinum boy
you got anything to employ? perhaps a decoy
or a toy, that I’d enjoy?
Last edited by murphmanny on Dec 1st, '09, 03:09, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: What you guys think?

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 1st, '09, 02:25

Hmmm not bad...short and sweet
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Re: What you guys think?

Postby murphmanny » Dec 1st, '09, 03:09

Ya so far. I have an updated version.
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Re: What you guys think?

Postby Requiem » Dec 1st, '09, 03:14

lmao... a macbeth rap...

try not to mention anything from today's era tho.. (corvette)
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Re: What you guys think?

Postby murphmanny » Dec 1st, '09, 03:15

Requiem wrote:lmao... a macbeth rap...

try not to mention anything from today's era tho.. (corvette)


LOL tell me about it. Fucking english class.

And aight, I'll take that in consideration, thank you.
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Re: What you guys think?

Postby gutawafang » Dec 1st, '09, 03:18

Mostly random rhymes. Not macbeth-ish enough to me. It's short and sweet though, at least it flows like a rap. :y:
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Re: What you guys think?

Postby murphmanny » Dec 1st, '09, 03:20

gutawafang wrote:Mostly random rhymes. Not macbeth-ish enough to me. It's short and sweet though, at least it flows like a rap. :y:


Pretty much my first time trying to make one. It doesn't have to be entirely on Macbeth but rather giving a full rap to summarize the book.

I have to sing after I'm done it so.... that could have issues lol. Where's Wayne's autotune when ya need it? ahha
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Re: What you guys think?

Postby gutawafang » Dec 1st, '09, 03:22

murphmanny wrote:
gutawafang wrote:Mostly random rhymes. Not macbeth-ish enough to me. It's short and sweet though, at least it flows like a rap. :y:


Pretty much my first time trying to make one. It doesn't have to be entirely on Macbeth but rather giving a full rap to summarize the book.

I have to sing after I'm done it so.... that could have issues lol. Where's Wayne's autotune when ya need it? ahha

Good luck in your presentation then. Well, it's easy to rap this out. So don't worry so much bout it. ;)
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Re: What you guys think?

Postby murphmanny » Dec 1st, '09, 03:24

Thanx, I think I got most of it down. :happy:
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Re: What you guys think?

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 1st, '09, 04:12

Short, and boring.
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