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Diabolical Suggestion (Keystyle)

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Diabolical Suggestion (Keystyle)

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 30th, '09, 07:10

They still fear this...
This very pen I'm writing with is filled with demons
Skilled at defeating when thoughts spill like semen
"Feeders" are always fulfilled when reading
Like when they stalk prey to kill and bleed 'em
Rhymes thrill when "speeding" over every page
Like the "motor" never fades; of course forever age-
-Less; text message Satan on an hourly basis
Ironically, participate in genocide of cowardly racists
Shower an oasis in blood; blood of slain foes
I'll cut ya "main flow" just to gut "T-Pain's hoes"
Masturbate when your pain shows; laugh when you say no
I'm the third prophet, after Jesus and Hitler
Making absurd profit by being the meanest to spit words
Purely a lyrical machinist that splits verbs
Just a North Korean that prefers to invade the border
You never made a quarter even with all your fake supporters

Wrote this in like 7 minutes; one of the first times I actually tried writing as fast as possible non-stop. I rather spend more time. Feedback would be appreciated. :flower:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Diabolical Suggestion (Keystyle)

Postby gutawafang » Nov 30th, '09, 07:12

multis :y:
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Re: Diabolical Suggestion (Keystyle)

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 30th, '09, 07:13

Yeah like seein keystyles without thinkin get to see what comes out naturally. Nicely done homie
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Re: Diabolical Suggestion (Keystyle)

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 30th, '09, 07:16

Appreciate the feed, guta and Yah. :)
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Diabolical Suggestion (Keystyle)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Nov 30th, '09, 09:18

it's ill for 7 min,, you got good multies , over here,, keep it up,,, but dont try to rush things, jus take your time and make something perfect ,, it would be better ,,,,, :y:
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Re: Diabolical Suggestion (Keystyle)

Postby Relapse.LP » Dec 1st, '09, 05:16

Slim Zaddy wrote:it's ill for 7 min,, you got good multies , over here,, keep it up,,, but dont try to rush things, jus take your time and make something perfect ,, it would be better ,,,,, :y:

Thanks for the feedback. :y:

Yeah, I usually take it slower, but I never done a true keystyle and I wanted to see how it felt like.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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