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Re: Another Song About Bre

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 22nd, '09, 00:35

Thanks again Jus and Zu
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Re: Another Song About Bre

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 22nd, '09, 07:22

Yah-hah wrote:Yeah agree with Zu. Yeah man wanna know how that goes

Jus I just wrote it out....monday its happening
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Re: Another Song About Bre

Postby eminemgirl1234 » Nov 23rd, '09, 16:50

Fa-Q wrote:
eminemgirl1234 wrote:^EEEEEK! I WONDER WHAT SHE'S GONNA SAY! OMIGOD! EEEEK! I WANNA KNOW EVERYTHING! OKAY? I WANNA KNOW EVERYTHING! PM ME THE DETS, ALRIGHT?

Haha ok chicka


Um, are gonna send me the dets?
"Sometimes I feel so alone,
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...

Malina a.k.a Mickey

"Ignorance is your new best friend!"-Paramore
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Re: Another Song About Bre

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 23rd, '09, 17:51

eminemgirl1234 wrote:
Fa-Q wrote:
eminemgirl1234 wrote:^EEEEEK! I WONDER WHAT SHE'S GONNA SAY! OMIGOD! EEEEK! I WANNA KNOW EVERYTHING! OKAY? I WANNA KNOW EVERYTHING! PM ME THE DETS, ALRIGHT?

Haha ok chicka


Um, are gonna send me the dets?

Lol yea I will
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Re: Another Song About Bre

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 24th, '09, 13:03

Welp i gave this to her yesterday after school
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Re: Another Song About Bre

Postby Slim Zaddy » Nov 24th, '09, 14:35

mmmmm, in terms of emotions its' great ,, i liked verse 2 more, nice shit homie, i like emotions staff, and you have lured me to read it all , great job ,,,,,, :)
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Re: Another Song About Bre

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 24th, '09, 19:54

Thanks Zaddy
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Re: Another Song About Bre

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 1st, '09, 05:34

Thanks again PINK
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