New Quick Verse (Not a Macdaddy Diss)

[Fa-Q]

I know it might seem like a jab at Mac but I'm just joking man


I saw Macdaddy on a dirt road, he wanted to fuck Tailor Swift,
He couldn't do so, she said no, so I gave the failure a lift,
He drove by the penitentiary, he wanted to give the jailer a gift,
It was a Christmas tree, with his two testicles as ornaments,
And he promises since he was castrates, he hasn't looked at porn since,
On the ground is your best look,
like your one of eleven, the rest is shook,
whoops you just got shook by Brian Westbrook,
Lying on the breast of brooke,
Brooke Shields, nope there's no more of her I've looked in fields,
So for while we just stand and mosh,
With Trent Cole and Kyle Vandenbosh,
Looking like a child standin lost,
Everybody knows, I'm all ready in tip top shape,
I'm smiling naked ready to give hip hop a rape,
My flip flops are taped, to each of my soles,
Fuckin every girl on TR, reachin my goals,

[j2dat]

lol...

not bad, i was feelin it, keep it up bro

favorite lines:

Everybody knows, I'm all ready in tip top shape,
I'm smiling naked ready to give hip hop a rape,
My flip flops are taped, to each of my soles,
Fuckin every girl on TR, reachin my goals


niice

[Fa-Q]

Lol thanks Deezy

[Yah-hah]

Haha dude I really dug it. Has a nice flow to it. multies were good. too. "jailer a gift" lol bunch of lines made me laugh. ending was dope. I see the eagle shoutys lol. Kyle vandebosh line multied together really well. Dope funny piece man.

[Fa-Q]

Lol thanks Jus

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Bump

[BILI]

Nice man I liked it a lot,especially those last few lines,nice job man

[macdaddy019967]

haha it was good
it sure felt like a diss though

[Fa-Q]

haha it was good
it sure felt like a diss though

I just wanted to throw in Tailor swift to my rhyme scheme and I remember all those dirty things you would do to Tailor so...

[macdaddy019967]

haha it was good
it sure felt like a diss though

I just wanted to throw in Tailor swift to my rhyme scheme and I remember all those dirty things you would do to Tailor so...

haha i know man it was a good verse i enjoyed it good job keep it up

[Nimbus_9]

you're like a funny version of Em (where as he tries to be dark, you are just really funny), i liked your multis and your sense of humor was brilliant


can I get some feed now that I clarified lol
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[Fa-Q]

Thanks Nimbus