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back n forth idea

Postby Edge » Dec 7th, '09, 06:07

me and my friend chilled with mary jane and than wrote like a verese or so... its about to guys going at it over one robbing the other ones friend, but it turns out the guy was set up to rob him so they both go after the guy who set him up. not sure if its corney or not but this is what iv got


me: heard ur the one that robbed my boy
if thats the case, a fatal plots deployed
got me annoyed with ur crossin the line
if u fuck with me i be tossin them 9s

him: man, i dont even think wer runnin on the same track
i slap and crack ya back, i am higher than shaq

me: keep fuckin with me itl be more than a verbal attack
watch ya back as u open ur door, cuz theres a bomb trap
il kill u worse than a veteran with a vietnam plaque

him: what i cant say in pencil, il say in the pen
motherfucker once i say it, beter never happen again
cause like a pen, when i got beef its permanent
so if i teach u something once, u better be learnin it

me: what the fuck u tryin to be, a motha fucken teacher
if thats the case i guess that makes me a preacher
preachin about lessons of real hip-hop
and if u talk up u gunna see my clip pop
i rip out ya guts like a dutchie
im always blazing, so u could never touch me

him: no need to get touchy

me: sorry man but i gotta show my friend loyalty

him: its not my fault tho, so dont try to spoil me

me: man, what the fuck u suposed to mean by that

him: i cant tell u nothing, cause i just aint no rat



we gotta finish, but thoughts so far would be appreciated, good or bad :smoking:
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Re: back n forth idea

Postby gutawafang » Dec 7th, '09, 06:54

pretty nice man. i did this before. :y:
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Re: back n forth idea

Postby Edge » Dec 7th, '09, 07:01

gutawafang wrote:pretty nice man. i did this before. :y:


thanks man, i still gotta finish it
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