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Postby Yah-hah » Dec 5th, '09, 10:50

Went out with this girl from Brazil named Nina last fall. She is so pretty but really crazy and all that. But anyways for some reason she has really been on my mind. So I decided at 3 in the morning I'll right what's on my mind. Image



My eyes twitch at the sight of this tunnel vision,
I'm stuck in this tunnel wishin I wasn't livin,
But yo why am I even trippin screamin so slow,
Confused feelings staring at old Nina photos,
Like for real dude why you even thinkin this,
Damn emotions got me floatin and I'm sinkin quick,
Once was considered her lover now I'm barely a true friend,
Why is my stomach in knots at the sight of her kissin her new man,
What to do damn, I'm so unsure where the hell my head is at,
Staring at angels from hell where I'm dead in fact,
I'm dead? Oh crap, how did things turn out this way,
How did I get here why am I burned throughout my face,
Throughout this race I walked with a bit hesitant,
Like if I never see her again it won't hurt anyless than this,
But wait, hold up I've got someone better why are these thoughts emerging,
Her old pictures are just voodoo dolls she bought to curse me,
But why not it's working cause I'm trippin even know,
I don't think about it baby, Believe me, how?

Sittin here staring at my ex's pictures,
The one who left me stretched in fissures,
I'm left with liquor to summon her laugh's life
Because I know that I don't want her back, right?

How is it now I can't eat or sleep because of her,
Thoughts from talks of how our love will endure,
The last words we spoke 'Juntos Sempre',
I only half know the meaning, backtrack then you go this way,
From the first second I learned that 'te amo mucho',
Then screamin and yellin she 'grande punto',
'Se Halba', you know? oh you don't speak the language,
I never knew portugues could be so dangerous,
But yo I gotta a girl now I'm in love with her crazy,
So how is it that all of a sudden she's been on my mind lately,
I see her myspace photos of her and another guy,
Trippin cause that was my arm around her in another time,
Hold up know homie come on get it together,
Brazil isn't so close but now I'm under the weather,
But it's no better when thoughts of her creep in my head,
Yes you heard me that's what I said,
Wake up trippin thinkin it's her sleepin in my bed,

Sittin here staring at my ex's pictures,
The one who left me stretched in fissures,
I'm left with liquor to summon her laugh's life
Because I know that I don't want her back, right?

Gotta get ahold of my head and stop trippin,
She's gone forever so stop wishin,
But even if I had a wish is it her I would need,
When I close my eyes and Tawna's by, is it her that I see,
I tried to forget her face and her hips,
Her kiss unwished from my lips,
Eclisped behind the shooting star,
It's shooting far but is it within my reach?
Like even if I could would I cheat?
When I think maybe it could be so,
I turn the channel of my mind to another show,
But yo if you have to turn then there must be an issue,
When I say the words 'I love you" when I go to kiss you,
Wake lookin pissed to, like damn did I mess up,
Should I have never gone on to the next one,
Tawna? the next one? I can't believe I would ever question that,
Cause she is my world, my girl, the only blessing that,
I can hold and never let go forget Nina's spanish speak,
I watch as these walls vanish see, now I can finally catch some sleep,
So now I'll rest in peace, with the angel God left for me.
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Nina's pictures

Postby AliJack » Dec 5th, '09, 13:46

Nice shit for sure man, you gotta record this, it would sound sweeettt :worship:
Love the "changin language and still rhymin with it" style haha
flows well throughout
what's grande punto? :unsure:

and WOWOWOW any chance that hooch movin to Dubai soon? :o
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Re: Nina's pictures

Postby shade45staff » Dec 5th, '09, 13:58

I'm From Brazil Man,i liked this rhyme,pretty good..and yes..the Brazilian girls are so sweet
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Re: Nina's pictures

Postby AliJack » Dec 5th, '09, 14:07

Scott M wrote:lol, you've got ur current GF pregnant, and now you're looking at old pictures of Nina and still getting affected by the thought of her kissing another guy?

lol, you're trolling a Creative Writing piece, and yet you still complain about us and report our spam?
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Re: Nina's pictures

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 6th, '09, 05:01

She isn't pregnant. test results were negative. I write what I'm thinking, not wat would be the right thing to think about. If it's on my mind then I'll write about it. Don't see how it's being disloyal to my girlfriend for having thoughts about an ex. We all have done that, I just wrote my feelings. I'm not saying I want ot hook up with her or have sex with her, I'll never see her again she lives in Brazil, but I was simply trying to get things off of my mind by writing them out. Glad you enjoyed it though. P.s. grande punto is big bitch roughly.
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Nina's pictures

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 7th, '09, 08:42

Pretty dope Jus...good story telling but you with Tawna now...? Right, no excess feelings for Nina....


On a side note...goddamn that booty on dat girl
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Re: Nina's pictures

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 7th, '09, 08:46

Yeah me and tawna are of course. Was just thinkin about the old times tryin to sleep. And on that side note. :confusion:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Nina's pictures

Postby Drama Setter » Dec 7th, '09, 12:49

Cool man , very good as usual , and the girl is definitely hot :y:
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Re: Nina's pictures

Postby J Roc » Dec 7th, '09, 14:26

Yah-hah wrote:Went out with this girl from Brazil named Nina last fall. She is so pretty but really crazy and all that. But anyways for some reason she has really been on my mind. So I decided at 3 in the morning I'll right what's on my mind. Image



My eyes twitch at the sight of this tunnel vision,
I'm stuck in this tunnel wishin I wasn't livin,
But yo why am I even trippin screamin so slow,
Confused feelings staring at old Nina photos,
Like for real dude why you even thinkin this,
Damn emotions got me floatin and I'm sinkin quick,
Once was considered her lover now I'm barely a true friend,
Why is my stomach in knots at the sight of her kissin her new man,
What to do damn, I'm so unsure where the hell my head is at,
Staring at angels from hell where I'm dead in fact,
I'm dead? Oh crap, how did things turn out this way,
How did I get here why am I burned throughout my face,
Throughout this race I walked with a bit hesitant,
Like if I never see her again it won't hurt anyless than this,
But wait, hold up I've got someone better why are these thoughts emerging,
Her old pictures are just voodoo dolls she bought to curse me,
But why not it's working cause I'm trippin even know,
I don't think about it baby, Believe me, how?

Sittin here staring at my ex's pictures,
The one who left me stretched in fissures,
I'm left with liquor to summon her laugh's life
Because I know that I don't want her back, right?

How is it now I can't eat or sleep because of her,
Thoughts from talks of how our love will endure,
The last words we spoke 'Juntos Sempre',
I only half know the meaning, backtrack then you go this way,
From the first second I learned that 'te amo mucho',
Then screamin and yellin she 'grande punto',
'Se Halba', you know? oh you don't speak the language,
I never knew portugues could be so dangerous,
But yo I gotta a girl now I'm in love with her crazy,
So how is it that all of a sudden she's been on my mind lately,
I see her myspace photos of her and another guy,
Trippin cause that was my arm around her in another time,
Hold up know homie come on get it together,
Brazil isn't so close but now I'm under the weather,
But it's no better when thoughts of her creep in my head,
Yes you heard me that's what I said,
Wake up trippin thinkin it's her sleepin in my bed,

Sittin here staring at my ex's pictures,
The one who left me stretched in fissures,
I'm left with liquor to summon her laugh's life
Because I know that I don't want her back, right?

Gotta get ahold of my head and stop trippin,
She's gone forever so stop wishin,
But even if I had a wish is it her I would need,
When I close my eyes and Tawna's by, is it her that I see,
I tried to forget her face and her hips,
Her kiss unwished from my lips,
Eclisped behind the shooting star,
It's shooting far but is it within my reach?
Like even if I could would I cheat?
When I think maybe it could be so,
I turn the channel of my mind to another show,
But yo if you have to turn then there must be an issue,
When I say the words 'I love you" when I go to kiss you,
Wake lookin pissed to, like damn did I mess up,
Should I have never gone on to the next one,
Tawna? the next one? I can't believe I would ever question that,
Cause she is my world, my girl, the only blessing that,
I can hold and never let go forget Nina's spanish speak,
I watch as these walls vanish see, now I can finally catch some sleep,
So now I'll rest in peace, with the angel God left for me.


Ha ha. I really don't have anything to say to this :confusion: ... Who are u in love with? lol

I like it though. Storytelling is a plus. Kinda Poetic too. Props My Native negro :y:
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Re: Nina's pictures

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 7th, '09, 14:48

Haha thanks drama and Roc. Was just trippin one night and wrote about it. I love my girl to death man. Good lookin out peeps
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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