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Memory Lane

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Memory Lane

Postby Tash8 » Dec 5th, '09, 15:22

Yo, Yo, Yo

a look at the days when i had it all
my homies we chill, my bad girl uhh

ha, so much changed, it happened too quick
never celebrated, felt we flew thru it
i'm new to this, this life i have
ain't used to it, it's not like my last
but i'm takin a moment, to look at my past
before ya'll left, and went off to college
our high school last semester, nothing can top it
filled our brains up wit nutin but nonsense
all the great times from the games to the concerts
when scottys dad, saw us, being gay on the carpet
a year it was, what seemed unlikely
turned so real when I found whitney liked me
never thought a girl would change me so much
she made me who i am so its nothing but love
even if we dont talk much (any more)

*hook*
Oh I wish, that you'd know
that you'd always be my friend - for sure
and oh I wish that you'd say
you'd be here for me - every day
now i see, it'll never be the same
as I fall and trip down memory lane
fall and trip down memory lane
memory lane it wont be the same

it's 3 am and i'm still up writing
i feel that's the great thing 'bout me
--when it comes thing I love, I try so hard
even when I'm dealt these fucked up cards
ten years ago, I couldn't even speak a word of english
now i'm rapping, wish you could hear me spit this
--and oh how far I've come
from the day when I got in stupid fights for fun
lost most my cool, and then it's on
but then i grew up and made this song
talking about hwo my pain is gone
and fuck yall sayin i'm wrong
cause i know i'm not, your paintings off
redraw your thought, your cadence stopped


*hook*
Oh I wish, that you'd know
that you'd always be my friend - for sure
and oh I wish that you'd say
you'd be here for me - every day
now i see, it'll never be the same
as I fall and trip down memory lane
fall and trip down memory lane
memory lane it wont be the same

*bridge*
Once I blow up here, no stopping me
waiting on the clock, for the hating to seize
livin' my life, like homies what it do?
shit on your mind? then come on through
say it to my face, man i fuckin dare you to
straight to my face, why ain't you coming thru
yea we both know why, it'd be dumb of you to
yeah, yeah it'd be dumb of you to

I wonder where I'll be ten years from now
who I am, what I do, when where and how?
will I still be cool with those who I cared about?
I really can't tell, i hope that's the case, now
i'm moving on with this life I want
got the vision in my head, just gotta get it out
when I say 10 years, it better be, better than where I am now
cause i feel like i'm missin out these next few years
when ya'll moved on and left me here
but rest assured, i'm making the best from nothing
and there's no stopping me till i amount to something
yup, amount to something to make you proud, sooo

*hook*
Oh I wish, that you'd know
that you'd always be my friend - for sure
and oh I wish that you'd say
you'd be here for me - every day
now i see, it'll never be the same
as I fall and trip down memory lane
fall and trip down memory lane
memory lane it wont be the same

*bridge*
Once I blow up here, no stopping me
waiting on the clock, for the hating to seize
livin' my life, like homies what it do?
shit on your mind? then come on through
say it to my face, man i fuckin dare you to
straight to my face, why ain't you coming thru
yea we both know why, it'd be of dumb of you to
yeah, yeah it'd be dumb of you to
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Re: Memory Lane

Postby Tash8 » Dec 5th, '09, 19:36

bummmmmmmmp
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Re: Memory Lane

Postby classthe_king » Dec 5th, '09, 20:42

I loved this. Good rhymes, good emotion and good imagery. Only problem i have with it is

when scottys dad, saw us, being gay on the carpet

:confusion:
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Memory Lane

Postby Tash8 » Dec 5th, '09, 21:52

classthe_king wrote:I loved this. Good rhymes, good emotion and good imagery. Only problem i have with it is

when scottys dad, saw us, being gay on the carpet

:confusion:


hahahah, we were wrestling..and his dad thought we were gay...
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Re: Memory Lane

Postby Requiem » Dec 6th, '09, 04:31

Tash8 wrote:
classthe_king wrote:I loved this. Good rhymes, good emotion and good imagery. Only problem i have with it is

when scottys dad, saw us, being gay on the carpet

:confusion:


hahahah, we were wrestling..and his dad thought we were gay...


read through it and had the exact same question LOL

i like the story telling vibe here. it sounds personal in a good light... :y:
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Re: Memory Lane

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 6th, '09, 05:29

Yeah man good vibe to it. Kinda slow bobbin my head to it kinda vibe. Dig it man.
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Re: Memory Lane

Postby Tash8 » Dec 6th, '09, 05:43

Yah-hah wrote:Yeah man good vibe to it. Kinda slow bobbin my head to it kinda vibe. Dig it man.


that's the vibe you got hahaha? aite well let's see if that's the vibe u get when u hear it, i've finished a rough mix, will post it tmw.
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Re: Memory Lane

Postby Tash8 » Dec 8th, '09, 07:07

if yall wanna listen to the song, here:
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