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Listen to your heart

Postby mcZu » Dec 8th, '09, 01:10

Shout out to D.Dubs (Emadyville) for hooking me up with this beat.

I listen to my heart, all the four chambers fall apart
It’s depression pressing at love and anger in my heart
Yeah.. it’s hard, it was special when we started
I was speechless when we met, Medusa Allure
Her eyes lured me, seduced her with a cure
Our feelings were secluded from the world like a cir-
..cus, opposites yet the same like an oxymoron
Now I feel like a moron, ‘cause going on
Was the dumbest thing we could have done
The full moon your sobriquet, I opt to fist-
..fight my emotions when I look at the moon I sob and sit
On a pedestal where cupid sat, it’s stupid some people said
I guess they were right, ‘cause it all left
All there is left is me sitting her with a pen and I write what’s left...

It’s hard like the organ in your chest, while I try to ingest
These feelings are eating right through my flesh
I get a flash back ‘bout this shadow queen like chess
It seems like you’re not with me so I tempt the temptation
Within when ever I feel sick in my stomach, it’s aching
Butterflies are a butterfly knife right through my life
Stabbing the essence of love, right..
Her presence is not present so I aim for the future
I past that, and you sure?
You don’t want me, ‘cause a lie-ability like that is sad, fact
Far away, that’s where she can put her ass-at
I’m crying from the inside, but I’ll laugh last
Some wounds heal over time, but I’ll try to recover fast
One thing I’ll always have, a scar covering my heart’s pass-age...
Last edited by mcZu on Dec 8th, '09, 15:03, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Listen to your heart

Postby Emadyville » Dec 8th, '09, 01:47

butterfly line was dope as fuck, i want you to record this homie :y: :y:

Very good piece :smoking:
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Re: Listen to your heart

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 8th, '09, 03:33

Hell yeah man. I gotta hear the beat. Kinda got a good feel for how it probably sounds though. Yeah man butterfly line is sick man. keep droppin that fire Zu. Wanna hear it recorded. p.s. Wolf collab hit you up with a verse later tonight or tomorrow.
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Re: Listen to your heart

Postby RealSickLindley » Dec 8th, '09, 03:34

Nice Shit..

It’s hard like the organ in your chest, while I try to ingest
These feelings are eating right through my flesh
I get a flash back ‘bout this shadow queen like chess

My personal highlight, flowed sick.
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Re: Listen to your heart

Postby mcZu » Dec 8th, '09, 14:59

Emadyville wrote:butterfly line was dope as fuck, i want you to record this homie :y: :y:

Very good piece :smoking:

Thanks Dubs, I'll definitely record this when I have the time to do so. :b:

Yah-hah wrote:Hell yeah man. I gotta hear the beat. Kinda got a good feel for how it probably sounds though. Yeah man butterfly line is sick man. keep droppin that fire Zu. Wanna hear it recorded. p.s. Wolf collab hit you up with a verse later tonight or tomorrow.

Thanks Yah, 'preciate it, man. And, hell yeah, hit me up with that Wolf verse. :b:

RealSickLindley wrote:Nice Shit..

It’s hard like the organ in your chest, while I try to ingest
These feelings are eating right through my flesh
I get a flash back ‘bout this shadow queen like chess

My personal highlight, flowed sick.

Thanks Lindley, 'preciate it. Thanks for checking it out. :b:
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