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Nimbus - Eye Whites Of Satan

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Nimbus - Eye Whites Of Satan

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 13th, '09, 17:20

staring in the eyes whites of Satan, recite the bible verbatim
bow to the sky and I'm praying whichever God that I'm facing

offer ya graces while i author this cadence if not its off ta the races
constantly training with these scholarly pages, chronically failin

crosses I'm nailed an let these razors weave through my wrist
i breath...i walk...i feel....i talk...but do i even exist

seizing my gift, slice my name into society's under belly
young and ready, machetes deadly, notoriety done but dwelling

others paling, medley felony, look at what I've spun, It's sad
so I lunge with wrath, cut the crap into a hundred pungent scraps
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Re: Nimbus - Eye Whites Of Satan

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 13th, '09, 19:53

I like these little 4 line verse thingys...they're dope..my favorite were the last three...was really random shtuff but the "eyewhites of satan" is a cool concept...keep it up
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