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I Wrote This While i''m high .. starting to come off tho

Postby J Roc » Dec 9th, '09, 22:09

Somebody said .. They didn't think ROccy's ill ? Well That Boy Ain't Right .. Like bobby Hill
I ain't acting cocky , Chill ..... Ya'll jacking my swag, ur "Biting my buzz" like Popping Pills
I Got More Balls Than Soccer Drills ... Everything i ever spit was nice as fuck
Your gonna see more pistal whippin than..When i Tied him up
U Just Gotta Try Enough , Everything u want ...U Gotta Buy The Stuff
Just Bet I knew , drug dealer's , i'm a connection dude ...
Find the hotel to Check into .... Stock the coke and the Pepsi Too
Fuck ur Wack Chorus When i Blast Four Clip's Your Gonna Screech like Zack Morris
As a matter of fact forum's, Lines-of-crack-bitch .. I'm-a-"Addick" Likke Ur Fam's Storage
Chapstick For My Damn Sore Lip's ...... I'm telling you this is ur Last Warning
You aren't that cute , My Darling ... No date so "Talk to yaself" like My Darling
Don't track snow on the Dry Carpet... Ur gonna need tissue paper when I Start Shit
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Re: I Wrote This While i''m high .. starting to come off tho

Postby Nimbus_9 » Dec 9th, '09, 23:41

i thought it was okay, your punches weren't too crazy but from your style and noteriety on here I'm judt guessing you're rusty, keep it up man, that styles nice
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Re: I Wrote This While i''m high .. starting to come off tho

Postby Yah-hah » Dec 10th, '09, 01:53

Shake that rust off homie we need you back. :smoking:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: I Wrote This While i''m high .. starting to come off tho

Postby J Roc » Dec 10th, '09, 03:23

Thank's for readin guy's ..... Never wrote anything stoned before haha ... Went for a nice nap afterwards tooo
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Re: I Wrote This While i''m high .. starting to come off tho

Postby Emadyville » Dec 10th, '09, 05:20

Haha loved the last line, can't wait till you're back in it full force homie, keep writin :y:
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Re: I Wrote This While i''m high .. starting to come off tho

Postby Solace » Dec 15th, '09, 04:00

Swear I left feed for this shit already..Still found it dope...Tho maybe thats cause i suck with punches so every punch i see i like haha
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