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Determined (Keystyle)

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Determined (Keystyle)

Postby AOBrien09 » Dec 18th, '09, 00:09

I get told a need to elevate, hell I'll wait
but am so determined too escalate my style till it's great,
and all the while a break, a sweat with the lyric's a make,
but it's critical for the hate, to come in so my lyrical state,
can reach new height's, cause harsh criticism equal's success,
like Simon Cowell, every time am pitted with them people let's
just say my determination reaches another level,
unlike that Geldoff girl Peaches, man, brother am'a excel,
successfully on my own term's not feed off anyone else s,
make my own name an not talk bout any gun's or sex it's
outdated overused and abused like Wayne who's must be confused,
but it shows their can be homo's gangstas that cruise to success gon' are the rules,
when gay dude's couldn't, but a ain't homophobic, just a hater of lie's,
anyway gonna go off topic, just gonna make a date with comprise,
an back to the subject, cause a ain't done yet,
any hate spun yet, are you gonna make a dumb threat,
just to check, ok well for the last time on this,
let's be honest a see dumbness in my spit thier's no twist,
cause one thing a can promise,
my worst critic's me alway's feel hopeless, not focused, so fuck this !

some quick shit :sweating:
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Are gonna grieve when we leave, dawg fo sheezy
Can't leave rap alone the game needs me"
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