Short and Sweet

[-[Zach]-]

it must be a conspiracy, i swear it seems everyones out to get me
stressin', guessin' the cess is the only things that rests me
ain't a thing to do but drink my brew and wonder where the time went
the life we knew went by too soon, where'd it go? i can't seem to find it
too much thinking has got me seeing the world for what it is
we're born alone, we die alone, never trust a bitch
i remember the better days, the better times, had dryer eyes
i write these rhymes in order to inquire minds
because wrong or right, its the way i want to live my life


i don't know its just something short i wanted to put up since this is the first time i've had internet in a long time haha. any comments, opinions, or feedback of any kind would be appreciated.

[Nimbus_9]

very inspirational, basic but elegant, Liked it try using better words to stream across your point though, that's my only critique

[Solace]

I thought it was dope, and yes short and sweet. Zach, where you been man I remember you used to post more often back sometime in 2008.

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ain't a thing to do but drink my brew and wonder where the time went
the life we knew went by too soon, where'd it go? i can't seem to find it

i remember the better days, the better times, had dryer eyes
i write these rhymes in order to inquire minds

Keep at it man.