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Re: I love multies.

Postby Relapse.LP » Dec 22nd, '09, 09:04

I definitely like your broad use of vocabulary and the multies are pretty good as well. Overall, pretty solid, but there is some room for improvement. :y:

Mind feeding these two. :angry:

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Re: I love multies.

Postby Solace » Dec 22nd, '09, 19:47

Sickk shit bro, reminds me of when I would write only multies with the sickest flowss. You have a good vocabulary, a lot better than me at least.

Mind feeding this? No its not trying to be lyrical so it judge it in that quality only:
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