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Back to My Old Habits

Postby Requiem » Dec 23rd, '09, 06:49

I'm like a modern day drug addict, falling back on my old habits,
simple like magic, but this aint about vanishing cabinets,
or disappearing rabbits, this is about managing tablets,
popping capsules, i'm a reverse sided magnet.
i'm like a fashionista giving you my passion to feast on,
but behind closed doors, like my mom when she's gone.
i'll wander into the kitchen, this can't be wrong,
there's plenty of medicine, and she won't be long.
weighing my options, this window of oppurtunity.
i acted stupidly, i didn't think it could ruin me.
i'm strong and healthy, why not be a little free?
i mean, it's not like either of my parents would see.
Here i am today, same shit, different way,
i'm a college student now, so what's a little play?
i'm a man, on my own, and damn it feels great.
so what's a pill or two, everybody makes mistakes...


appreciate feed :smoking:
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Re: Back to My Old Habits

Postby Solace » Dec 23rd, '09, 15:14

A major Eminem biteeee but other than that it was fresh. Imo the first 4 lines didnt serve justice to be first since they were outshined by the lines right after. I had a prettty sick flow to this. Would've liked some more multies though.
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Re: Back to My Old Habits

Postby Requiem » Dec 23rd, '09, 21:35

Solace wrote:A major Eminem biteeee but other than that it was fresh. Imo the first 4 lines didnt serve justice to be first since they were outshined by the lines right after. I had a prettty sick flow to this. Would've liked some more multies though.

i'm not biting eminem NUKKA i only speak from personal shit :angry: i did have an experience pretty similar to this, not to the level of drug monkey that eminem went to... but you get the idea :sweating:

thx for the feed :flower:
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