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Re: Emotional Piece.

Postby Emadyville » Dec 16th, '09, 05:13

I liked both verses, 2nd was better tho, seemed to be more emotional, but it was a nice piece for whoever it's about :y:
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Re: Emotional Piece.

Postby mcZu » Dec 17th, '09, 23:02

Agree with Emady on this one, second verse is better, imo. Both verses are good though, flow seems on point, multies are good and the content is, indeed, emotional. However, I would suggest tapping more in your vocabulary in order to stray from those basic rhymes. If you try to do that more often, your pieces will be much better.
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Re: Emotional Piece.

Postby Le Tunisien » Dec 24th, '09, 21:18

dope dope dope :worship:
flow was on point,nice multies and it meant something, nice drop!
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Re: Emotional Piece.

Postby Fa-Q » Dec 24th, '09, 21:35

your smile leaves me perplexed, all flustered and nervous,
but to you i'm nothing, i'm not even touching the surface,
i'm not rushing the service,

My favorite lines...pretty good drop...and enough multis where it doesn't seem forced and is natural...
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