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Le Tunisien Diss.

Postby ShamanamJehova » Jan 1st, '10, 21:39

This is a warning, I'm storming, Isreali pride....

Disasterous harzard, rapping this masterful jabber
javelin stabbing and grabbing men, after laughter and splatters
I'm so sick and a bastard, mapping graphical cancer
necromancer of life, the answer shatters all wacker
dudes and horrible rappers, flowing euphrates and oceans
Le tunisien is a rodent, a vermin toasting to omens
exploding his senses, Helen Keller of forums
He couldn't handle my quaram, of isreali explosions
potent ether-net I'm spitting with, you victim kid, I'll split ya cap
just spitting this with written raps, you horrible, a sickened act
I'm living this, you living at, a desolate piece of trash
making sure you teeth will nash, breathing ash to melt your past
belt will slash, punishment, to battle me, I'll rattle teeth
go ahead and try to saddle me, you nothing, bad at speech
Tunisien of tune is seen? either way it's foolish, see?
Lyrically abusing these, rappers who are bluiesh green
but nothing as a goolish scene, go ahead try to rhyme
I'll try to line, every single time, you will rhyme
but your accent is past it, sounding like a maggot
slurring all your words, with the other guy, the has been
assassin of everybody trying to speak
but their voice is going up and down like crying at me
so why would you be, releasing isreali in me
I'm the illest on the mic, not a figure of speech
The victor that bleach, and cleaning up the streets from the grease
keeping ya teens, in a sleep, and it's permanently
sending vermin at me, and people thinking I'm wack
but now you tryina hide, evil sinking your cap
and this is a fact, this type of rhyme I'm really relaxed,
sitting, eating a wrap, with nothing, feeling is wack
This is a warning, I'm storming, Isreali pride....
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Re: Le Tunisien Diss.

Postby AliJack » Jan 1st, '10, 21:40

you're a faggot.
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Re: Le Tunisien Diss.

Postby Spyder » Jan 1st, '10, 21:43

whats the reasoning for this? 13 posts i highly doubt hes done anything to you...
but naw man you were just rhyming to rhyme, there wasnt a topic or meaning to it
good multies and rhymes, alright vocab. but lack of personals make a weak diss
shoulda made this just a drop in here :unsure:
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Re: Le Tunisien Diss.

Postby Relapse.LP » Jan 1st, '10, 21:54

This diss is purely multies and nothing more. And you, good Jehova, are an idiot. :n:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Le Tunisien Diss.

Postby AliJack » Jan 1st, '10, 21:55

Relapse.LP wrote:This diss is purely multies and nothing more. And you, good Jehova, are an idiot. :n:

smh, listen to reasonable doubt and WASH YOUR MOUTH!
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Re: Le Tunisien Diss.

Postby Relapse.LP » Jan 1st, '10, 21:57

AliJack wrote:
Relapse.LP wrote:This diss is purely multies and nothing more. And you, good Jehova, are an idiot. :n:

smh, listen to reasonable doubt and WASH YOUR MOUTH!

Taking shots at Relapse? :(
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Le Tunisien Diss.

Postby AliJack » Jan 1st, '10, 21:59

Relapse.LP wrote:
AliJack wrote:
Relapse.LP wrote:This diss is purely multies and nothing more. And you, good Jehova, are an idiot. :n:

smh, listen to reasonable doubt and WASH YOUR MOUTH!

Taking shots at Relapse? :(

Go listen to Blueprint, then :unsure:
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Re: Le Tunisien Diss.

Postby Relapse.LP » Jan 1st, '10, 22:00

AliJack wrote:Go listen to Blueprint, then :unsure:

Yo, bum rush the show?
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Le Tunisien Diss.

Postby BILI » Jan 1st, '10, 22:01

Its ok,had some nice rhymes,but you need more personals for a diss
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Re: Le Tunisien Diss.

Postby AliJack » Jan 1st, '10, 22:01

Relapse.LP wrote:
AliJack wrote:Go listen to Blueprint, then :unsure:

Yo, bum rush the show?

im not that much of a hip hop head, help please :unsure:
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Re: Le Tunisien Diss.

Postby Relapse.LP » Jan 1st, '10, 22:06

AliJack wrote:
Relapse.LP wrote:
AliJack wrote:Go listen to Blueprint, then :unsure:

Yo, bum rush the show?

im not that much of a hip hop head, help please :unsure:

Public Enemy's debut. You got more homework ahead of you, my friend.
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Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Le Tunisien Diss.

Postby SajN » Jan 1st, '10, 22:13

Banned.


Different accounts.
! Is He Nuts? No, He's InSajN !
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