Right out the gate ft Yah-hah

[Ms. Lunaverse]

(Ms. Lunaverse)
Like who's the worst?
Ms. Lunaverse or Sadam Huessein's bombing plane that's soon to burst,
Who wants first,
I got the soon ta hurt the universe when I shoot my verse,
Use the words and set yer date,
Your hardly a heavy pillow, call him a featherwieght,
You want beef? then fuck it I aint eaten lunch since yesterday,
Don't worry I got the mop and a bucket to start cleanin up the mess you made,
Unless you say she's dope for the people who underestimate,
I'll turn this ta a scene for the police to come investigate,
I'm at least a hundred steps away runnin with my eyes closed,
That's right yo, Im writing with no typos with two fingers and a blindfold,
I'm ice cold, Got my left hand open and my right closed,
And I chose to silence ya right from the get go,
Soon as you hear this info you'll feel your skin go into slim mode,
My lyrics defy gravity, oxygens only in the soul of me,
I'm freefallin from tree pollen with only my multis to hold me,

Right out the gate,
I'm out to take every amount of faith from out the place,
And I'm proud to say I'm bout to make ya frown ya face,
So now I say get out my way, Killin you quick without a trace,

(Ms. Lunaverse)
This is Bronx rap,
It's one on one combat so I walk with 2 glocks strapped,
It's Vinnie Paz after knockin a twenty pack of Henney back,
I've got so many tats, I write with the ink in my saliva,
There's no time to think so don't blink when I'm rollin by ya,
My whole empire is based off of two verses and a hook,
My fist hit so hard you swear there's two person's with one look,
I'll hit you anonymously until you're no one,
It's like a homerun the way your dome spun,
You're so done, now fall to your knees and bow to your shogun,
There's no one, not allah or Jesus Christ,
Can grab your soul before you leave this life,
I'm hittin your retinas leavin you blinded,
Hiding your soul so that you won't find it,
I spit bars that will disinegrate and level Midas,
And when I finish I'll diminish back to being the Devil's sidekick.

Right out the gate,
I'm out to take every amount of faith from out the place,
And I'm proud to say I'm bout to make ya frown ya face,
So now I say get out my way, Killin you quick without a trace

(Yah-hah)
I'm on my Jedi mind tricks bled my knife shit,
Wearing my cleats as I kill like who said I might slip,
It's almost romantic how this tandem writes on some red wine night shit,
And you're dead rightblind kid my gift is god sent,
No ones as evil as this person is or as merciless as my God is,
I'm takin your skull and breakin it like a white promise,
Don't test this Native American,
Scalp ya mothers face off and laughin while I'm wearin it,
Wearing my wolf skin like "Take it off your scarin em",
I'm darin them to even try to touch my metaphors,
I'll chokeslam you through the metal floor,
Then stab you with the devil's horns,
Your rhymin weaker than primal creatures' final tweeker,
Like you still use knives and cleavers for sinus tweesers
I'll cut your dime and keep her for my extra wind chime features

[Yah-hah]

Jesus mami you spit insane on this one. Now they gonna see huh lol

[mcZu]

Nice collab, lacking some wordplay, but in terms of mulites it's ace.

[Spyder]

who is the girl

Ms - your two were dope, only things i got to say are dont say things just to rhyme
in a song like this there isnt a real topic because your ripping it lyrically, but you seem to jump around and say just completly random things while using good rhymes and mutlies. also your scheme changes a bit throughout the drop, you have for instance

This is Bronx rap,
It's one on one combat so I walk with 2 glocks strapped,
It's Vinnie Paz after knockin a twenty pack of Henney back,
I've got so many tats, I write with the ink in my saliva,

the "bolds" rhyme at each line, but the "italized" are in the same line
then the "underline" goes with the next one, so it looks like line 3 is alone

but good first drop from you 7.5/10

YH - didnt come as hard as you usually do on this one, you had a messed up scheme the whole time, 3 lines rhymed and then they changed, gotta have even lines rhyming. in audio its alright because YOU can flow it, but in text its harder for OTHER peple to flow

you had nice rhymes as mutlies as usual but lacked on other things

6/10

drop - 8/10 goodjob

[Yah-hah]

Idk man I'm pretty sure sure on Luna's part she was rhyming the "twenty pack" with "Henney back" Saliva goes with a different scheme. Idk Spyder I've always done three line schemes. I understand wat you mean bout the flow but I write it how I hear it in my head and I don't wanna change it for other people. I write wat I hear and leave it that way. IDK though man thanks for the feed

[Spyder]

yea i know on hers, those two things rhymed, but it was in the SAME line

and yea i get what your saying for its how you hear it in your head, im just giving u advice on how to make others flow it good as well

[Ms. Lunaverse]

Yeah Spyder I see wat ya saying. I didnt try to fix it for the audience just sort of wrote down wat I thought. But thanks for checkin out the multis lol

[Xray]

What's with the JMT references lol? You two sending demos to JMT or something?

Anyways I thought Ms. Lunaverse was acting mad gangsta on her verses. Thing is, you're rhymes come off as a guy written them, except you're not a guy, which I find fake/an act for a chick acting that hard. What you gonna do? Squirt you're breast milk all over someones face or something?

Wack. Yah-Hah's verse was OK. But seriously a chick acting hard I find that ridiculously hilarious.

[Yah-hah]

What's with the JMT references lol? You two sending demos to JMT or something?

Anyways I thought Ms. Lunaverse was acting mad gangsta on her verses. Thing is, you're rhymes come off as a guy written them, except you're not a guy, which I find fake/an act for a chick acting that hard. What you gonna do? Squirt you're breast milk all over someones face or something?

Wack. Yah-Hah's verse was OK. But seriously a chick acting hard I find that ridiculously hilarious.

Wow you serious dawg? Honestly thats the most ignorant thing I've ever heard. Apparently wherever you're from must have nice safe little streets. Dude come on, do you live on the internet? There are plenty of hardcore chicks out there. You even saying she is faking or acting is so fucking stupid I honestly can't believe you would say that. 1st of all just because a homegirl comes in here and spits crazy she is an act? Fuck that shit bro. 2nd you've never heard a girl spit like that? Honestly? Dude thats stupid as fuck who cares if she's a girl. Dude Fuck you and your stupid ass comments

[Xray]

What's with the JMT references lol? You two sending demos to JMT or something?

Anyways I thought Ms. Lunaverse was acting mad gangsta on her verses. Thing is, you're rhymes come off as a guy written them, except you're not a guy, which I find fake/an act for a chick acting that hard. What you gonna do? Squirt you're breast milk all over someones face or something?

Wack. Yah-Hah's verse was OK. But seriously a chick acting hard I find that ridiculously hilarious.

Wow you serious dawg? Honestly thats the most ignorant thing I've ever heard. Apparently wherever you're from must have nice safe little streets. Dude come on, do you live on the internet? There are plenty of hardcore chicks out there. You even saying she is faking or acting is so fucking stupid I honestly can't believe you would say that. 1st of all just because a homegirl comes in here and spits crazy she is an act? Fuck that shit bro. 2nd you've never heard a girl spit like that? Honestly? Dude thats stupid as fuck who cares if she's a girl. Dude Fuck you and your stupid ass comments

Haha it got to you? damn and I thought you were collabing with a bitch, turns out this was on some pussy power rules shit. Keep your mouth shut homie unless you wanna audio battle.

[Yah-hah]

Wow classy son. Yeah the little kid on the internet is so tough. Fuck you man. Thought you was cool but seriously you for real? Stop spammin my fuckin thread. You dont like the song thats fine say so and shut the fuck up.

[Spyder]

Yah-hah, Xray

could be dope ass shit

[Ms. Lunaverse]

We just put out the diss. Check it