Fireflies rewrite

[Fa-Q]

I wrote this for a girl who loves this song...heres the original http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CMr52bCXNdU


You would not believe your eyes,
If I tried to fly you to higher skies,
And I lit your world as you fall asleep,
Cause if your awoke there,
And left tear drops everywhere,
I'd just try to change the mood,
By just trying to hold your hand there,


I'd like to make myself leave,
But each day, my love is, growing,
It's hard to say that I'd rather stay awake when I'm asleep,
Cause everything is never like my dreams,


Cause I'll give you a thousand hugs,
While on my cheek there's a lipstick smudge,
As you try to teach me how to dance,
You dance above in red,
As I dream of you while in my bed,
A simple girl that's changing my head,


I'd like to make myself leave,
But each day, my love is, growing,
It's hard to say that I'd rather stay awake when I'm asleep,
Cause everything is never like my dreams,


When I fall asleep
I try to dream, but you just distract,
(Please make me stay here)
Cause you make me such an insomniac
(Please make me stay here)
Why do keep doubting me,
(Please make me stay here)
-----, I'm too awake to fall asleep,
Here we sit in higher skies,
Your room is lit with fire flies
As I miss your eyes, when they say farewell
But you'll know I'm never far,
As long as you wish on a star,
Cause I saved a few for you and I keep them in my car,


I'd like to make myself leave,
But each day, my love is, growing,
It's hard to say that I'd rather stay awake when I'm asleep,
Cause everything is never like my dreams,
I'd like to make myself leave,
But each day, my love is, growing,
It's hard to say that I'd rather stay awake when I'm asleep,
Cause everything is never like my dreams,
I'd like to make myself leave,
But each day, my love is, growing,
It's hard to say that I'd rather stay awake when I'm asleep,
Cause everything is never like my dreams,
Because my dreams are bursting at the seems,

[Yah-hah]

Wow was kinda ill bro. A few words kinda off but really good. I liked the lipstick smudge line. Chorus is spot on though man

[Fa-Q]

Thinks Jus...