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Postby DƎRDYPK » Jan 3rd, '10, 02:16

I saw this from a mile away tuni :shifty:
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Postby BILI » Jan 3rd, '10, 02:16

lol
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Postby FAME » Jan 3rd, '10, 02:17

Decent :y: Need to work on more advanced rhymes though.















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Re: Xray,Annon,Scott,Zu,Solace,Yah,Luna,Outkast DISS

Postby Le Tunisien » Jan 3rd, '10, 02:18

Yeah i know i gotta focus on the structure! ROFL

and ehh how creative was that huh?? :p :p
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Postby Spyder » Jan 3rd, '10, 02:49

Coleon wrote:I thought I was gonna see you "paying homage" to Eminem and Lloyd Banks again

this is how you should write though :y:

:laughing:

but shoulda been in backstage... you just wasting cw space
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Postby Le Tunisien » Jan 3rd, '10, 04:07

Coleon wrote:I thought I was gonna see you "paying homage" to Eminem and Lloyd Banks again

this is how you should write though :y:

ayo, dont even start ;)
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Postby DƎRDYPK » Jan 3rd, '10, 04:09

why did the 1st post get deleted ?
now it says I made the thread.... :unsure:
everyone gonna light me up now :'(
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Postby Solace » Jan 3rd, '10, 04:18

I remember the old days where there were like 10 consecutive battles between Cole and Tuna and all of em Coleon won :laughing:
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Postby Solace » Jan 3rd, '10, 04:22

Coleon wrote:
Solace wrote:I remember the old days where there were like 10 consecutive battles between Cole and Tuna and all of em Coleon won :laughing:


we need a rematch btw Solace, I'm gonna avenge all my losses minus James & Anon I guess

But I'm bad at rap battles, you know this :shakehead:
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Postby Solace » Jan 3rd, '10, 04:28

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Postby Spyder » Jan 3rd, '10, 05:11

Coleon writing again :worship:
thats what im doing too, i already beat James :smoking:
Anon some else will have to post the battle, like solace post his

then me and you are 1-1-1?? hows that work
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