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See right through you (Xray diss)

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See right through you (Xray diss)

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 1st, '10, 13:02

Yah-hah
Climb up on the top rope and bodydrop ya,
Find ya school and tomahawk ya from atop the locker,
I'll smash this cat till his knees and legs break,
Crack ya bones so bad your xrays needs an xray,
I'll wreck this guys best raps and Disect this guys flesh back,
The "Expert" is left hurt as I let this fly's chest crack,
Veteran of the section? No longer he is,
I'll rip off his skin so an xray is no longer needed,
I'll just look through this pussy with my x-ray vision,
Tired of listenin to xray's bitchin so listen to the beatin xrays gettin,
I see past you, hell I have to, your blockin the entrance,
Chopped off your calves so you have to bow for forgivness,
This fake's a cupcake soft and cold within,
I'll send him to a familiar place, with a doctor holdin him*,

Ms. Lunaverse
Xray, better watch out for the tech spray,
I'll make ya legs break and ya chest shake,
We'll see if I'm acting knock on ya door and clap him,
Empty handed the doctor'll ask wat happened,
I'm glad ya rappin but now I'm dissin the one who'se lately been inspired,
This lady red quick fire will scorch your Shady vet dick riders,
Like Lunaverse is sick but you just cant come to terms,
That a women and her words are sullen full of worth,
So now I'm steady choppin the noggin of this next bitch,
So everyone can view the new headless sexist,
I'm restless to test this xray's best shit,
My necklace will stretch this fag breathless,
Till even his wounds have exits,
So I'm slashin my weapon a tad bit reckless,
Try running away is this has-been legless

*As in an actual x-ray in a doctors hand
If you wonderin why just check the feed in the Ms. Lunaverse drop "Right out the gate".
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: See right through you (Xray diss)

Postby TiBon » Jan 1st, '10, 13:35

Ms. Lunaverse owns this one :smoking:
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Re: See right through you (Xray diss)

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 2nd, '10, 07:33

Thanks yall :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: See right through you (Xray diss)

Postby J Roc » Jan 2nd, '10, 09:33

Whoaa ....
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Re: See right through you (Xray diss)

Postby Ms. Lunaverse » Jan 2nd, '10, 09:58

Thanks PINK ;) You too TiBon
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The truth? resumed in my doom when I inhaled too soon"
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Re: See right through you (Xray diss)

Postby FAME » Jan 2nd, '10, 10:23

:o hot stuff right here. Yah-hah always brings it and damn its awesome to have another girl spitting in the CW section. Ms. Lunaverse is awesome!
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Re: See right through you (Xray diss)

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 2nd, '10, 10:43

UH-oh got some luna fans :o
All I'm sayin is. Ms.Lunaverse plus FAME=Destruction.
Ladies make it happen.
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: See right through you (Xray diss)

Postby Xray » Jan 2nd, '10, 14:17

Haha that seriously made my day. I needed to smash on someone so this is good, too bad it's gonna be over soon as I get mine all ready to record. But yo man for real, I'm not trying to act big or anything but you do know that you're gonna get fucked up right?

Gonna do this one for Anon too. ;)
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Over a billion Muslims, you could never stop Islam
Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone


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Re: See right through you (Xray diss)

Postby mcZu » Jan 2nd, '10, 14:20

This is gonna be interesting, I fucks with both of ya though. So I won't chose sides here.
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Re: See right through you (Xray diss)

Postby AliJack » Jan 2nd, '10, 15:53

Xray wrote:Haha that seriously made my day. I needed to smash on someone so this is good, too bad it's gonna be over soon as I get mine all ready to record. But yo man for real, I'm not trying to act big or anything but you do know that you're gonna get fucked up right?

Gonna do this one for Anon too. ;)

Sajjad, you needed for business matters, git yo stanky ass on MSN
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Re: See right through you (Xray diss)

Postby AliJack » Jan 2nd, '10, 15:58

mcZu wrote:This is gonna be interesting, I fucks with both of ya though. So I won't chose sides here.

Pause?
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Re: See right through you (Xray diss)

Postby BILI » Jan 2nd, '10, 16:02

Xray`s my homie,but damn this was pretty good,Yah your verse was awesome :worship: ,and luna you did good job 2
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Re: See right through you (Xray diss)

Postby Arabian Shady » Jan 2nd, '10, 18:09

Daym son, i thought the verse was well written , not many personals but this shit had flow, acouple punches, wordplays. Sick shit

Lunaverse's verse was good, i mean she's been on the forum relatively a small time to have a reason to diss X..but the flow was there, with a couple punches..

Ya'll have your work cut out..lol :b:
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50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: See right through you (Xray diss)

Postby eminemgirl1234 » Jan 2nd, '10, 18:25

^I agree with Abrabian. Propz, dude, propz! :worship:
Can't wait to see that battle.
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I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...

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Re: See right through you (Xray diss)

Postby Ms. Lunaverse » Jan 3rd, '10, 10:54

Thanks yall!
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