supernova (5 SG warmup)

[Edge]

Yea ur shit is good, but im only getting better
Got it down to the T like the twentieth letter
Grab bullets for the automatic and the berretta
I aint young jeezy, but I am a go getter
If ya girl look at me, than imma go get her
After I wet her chances r im gunna forget her
I eat this beef, I am not a vegetarian
Line some soldiers up, than imma burry ‘em
To me, 5 star generals is 3 star maggots
There used to be 2 generals, now its 3 faggots
Leave u with holes like a mothafucken hammock
I come strapped like a fucken Spyder jacket
Yea my styles nice, everybody tryin to jack it
Come to ya front door, with more than a pizza
Ur drops skill seems to lessen, so imma have to teach ya
I aint talkin bout my boy when I say bullets gunna meet ya
Il play Marshal u play Kim its nice to beat ya
I give solace to the spyder that escaped the zu
This is just a General warning, to this crew
Look at solace sayin that I wouldn’t respond
Now its time for funk flex to drop a fucken bomb
Im a Don, wanna meet my lucky charm?
Well my lucky piece her name is Ninna
If u don’t respect me, I suggeest u esteem her
Shots to ur head, shots to ur naval
The only time u use assault (a salt) is on the kitchen table
stop tryin to fuck with me, I am so unstable
word to Yah-hah, imma get lyrical
cuz everything they drop is satirical

line 12 - Spyder is a brand of jackets in America

[Xray]

Drop was not bad at all, haven't read your previous work but you need to work on punchlines, cause your punches weren't very special. It kinda got obvious at times lol but your multis are cool, I like it. And you got a steady flow which is good, could of been a bit more personal but I guess thats what you gotta work on. Just expect to be slaughtered though, all jokes aside. But you got balls kid. lmao pause.

[Solace]

All bias aside that was pretty bad. This was your best line, and it was weak:

The only time u use assault (a salt) is on the kitchen table

You need to work on your multies, I don't know what Xray is talking about them being pretty cool...They're pretty uncreative.

eg.
meet ya
teach ya
beat ya

Yawn, getting bored. You changed 1 word.

the zu
this crew

Though you changed both...Well now they just dont rhyme.

respond
fucken bomb

Doesnt rhyme.

Your multies suck flat out lol.

And what does this mean:

To me, 5 star generals is 3 star maggots
There used to be 2 generals, now its 3 faggots

How is it now 3 star maggots...And then there USED to be 2 generals?

Anyways, work on your multies, personals, punches, wordplay, everything.

[Spyder]

@Xray, expect to be slaughtered made my day

and it was ight, it was one of the better disses from your side
but all the examples Sol said brought it down

[Edge]

@Xray, expect to be slaughtered made my day

and it was ight, it was one of the better disses from your side
but all the examples Sol said brought it down

thnks for the feed... did u check out "3 stooges"? i felt i went harder in that one