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Moment of Clarity

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Moment of Clarity

Postby classthe_king » Jan 3rd, '10, 21:50

Wrote this awhile ago but i just now decieded to post it. Will be recorded once i find someone who will mix it.


Yo…I hit the beat harder than most
I got that rough style but I ain't hard to approach
I'm makin enemies when im startin to boast
So during the shots maybe it'd be smarter to coast
Jaws vicious like a fuckin shark when I spoke
You angry like the kid that ain't apart of the joke
Cause in these bars that ive wrote, me, mc anonymous
Spyder, solace and Zu are the only ones apart of this
Your bars are shit, we get bumped like the blind is readin
My raps cut you in half cause these lines are secant
Here lies a demon who is about to cease ya kind
I believe it's time to redesign your peace of mind
When I conceive a rhyme nobody can stand to leave
Ive got your attention now im about to plant the seed
Thank god for grantin me this moment of clarity
My tones have a rarity that’s left me alone in prosperity
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Re: Moment of Clarity

Postby Spyder » Jan 3rd, '10, 22:10

i thought it was dope shit bro
love the constant multies as usual :y:
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Re: Moment of Clarity

Postby Heffernan » Jan 3rd, '10, 22:17

i love the line "you angry like the kid who aint a part of the joke"
this sig is DOPE!
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Re: Moment of Clarity

Postby Emadyville » Jan 3rd, '10, 22:48

Pretty good, short but it flowed well :y:

This to the moment of clarity beat, cause I did a song to that beat a few years ago :smoking:
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Re: Moment of Clarity

Postby classthe_king » Jan 3rd, '10, 22:52

Thanks everyone :worship:

And yeah this is to that beat. It's one of my favorite beats of all time so i decieded to write to it.
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Re: Moment of Clarity

Postby Emadyville » Jan 3rd, '10, 23:03

Sweet, can't wait to hear it :y:
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Re: Moment of Clarity

Postby Solace » Jan 4th, '10, 00:40

That was fucking awesome man. Loved it :y:
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Re: Moment of Clarity

Postby dR3 » Jan 4th, '10, 01:29

Great shit homie :worship:
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Re: Moment of Clarity

Postby Cookzee » Jan 4th, '10, 03:15

i liked this, it seemd quite solid and just fit perfectly, the consistent flow of multies was dope

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Re: Moment of Clarity

Postby classthe_king » Jan 4th, '10, 03:39

Thanks everyone :worship:

Cookzee, ill check your drops later
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