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Favortie Peice thread:BILI-"Untitled"

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 4th, '10, 00:12

Ma` I need you by my side,cause I just feal that tonight I might die
I think its alright to cry,and I`m sorry when i acted impolite in July
Those gangsta acts in my raps were just a lie,and now I must try
To get things better,even pray to the sky,from today till goodbye
Pain inside me started to evolve,it was a problem that I couldn`t solve
It was fuckin my mind,I wanted to blow my head wit wooden revolver
I started to breathe deep,my heart beat started to accelerate fast
Before you die you get to see those flashbacks,so i tried to recreate past
I started to shake,so I asked my mom,is this how its supposed to be?
Ma` I really love you and you were the only one that was close to me
You were always wit me,from beginning and now even till the end
I gotta go now,its my time,but I want you to know that you`ll still be my friend
I saw tear on her face,her face had the shape like "please put the gun away"
Then I pulled the trigger and the last thing I saw was that she run away
A dead body just laid on the floor,and now it found a place to rest
Well now I`m goin to see the God,and finally embrace the best


This is my favorite,not best,but it was pretty emotional
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: 2010 Elegant Warmth

Postby BILI » Jan 4th, '10, 20:40

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fuck off :y:
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Re: Favortie Peice thread:BILI-"Untitled"

Postby BILI » Jan 4th, '10, 21:39

PINK wrote:Such a sweet piece, which made my heart sink at the end. Nicely done Bili.

'...I started to breathe deep,my heart beat started to accelerate fast
Before you die you get to see those flashbacks,so i tried to recreate past...'

I absolutely love those lines. :flower:

thx pink :flower:
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