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Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby Edge » Jan 4th, '10, 22:34

Solace wrote:I stopped reading after the 2nd line. The first lines are usually supposed to be really good in a piece, and yours didn't even rhyme.


same here lol
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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby Solace » Jan 4th, '10, 22:37

I see you got your name change. :y:
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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby Element. » Jan 4th, '10, 22:38

Solace wrote:I stopped reading after the 2nd line. The first lines are usually supposed to be really good in a piece, and yours didn't even rhyme.



lol
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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby Edge » Jan 4th, '10, 22:43

Solace wrote:I see you got your name change. :y:


yea i didnt like the "the" lol

if u got time man, id appreciate ur feed on my drop with yah-hah... i worked on multis like u told me too
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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby Element. » Jan 4th, '10, 22:44

:y: ^

Im tryin to work on Multi's And Vocabulary aswell
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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby Edge » Jan 4th, '10, 22:45

Smithy wrote::y: ^

Im tryin to work on Multi's And Vocabulary aswell


smithy peep my shit with yah-hah
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Re: Gangsters(F&F and 5SG Diss)

Postby Element. » Jan 4th, '10, 22:45

Edge wrote:
Smithy wrote::y: ^

Im tryin to work on Multi's And Vocabulary aswell


smithy peep my shit with yah-hah



Alryt :y:
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