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Multi-Fest (tryin something new)

Postby Spyder » Jan 5th, '10, 03:23

trying to use bigger vocab, complexity. used overload of multies and internals, half goofing around/half wanted to see if i could go back to the old style :sweating: feedback is loved

Taught my teachers a lesson see for second guessin me
Messin wit me I eventually lessin your destiny.
Liftin this tech with heat with aggression you testin his weaponry
Endin the feds cause hes, got respect in streets or penitentiaries
Shits elementary, takin you back to class to get started
Y’all rappers blast half hearted now that the masters departed
Classic when bars hit, when I drop you can tell I own it
To hell with notice on that melatonin I expel opponents.
Excel the flow wit rhymes like fireballs when I light em all
Trazadone mixed with Tylenol, welcome to my withdrawals.
Despite the fall I let these rappers blast with this page of shit
Well im the aftermath of being sick, call me post nasal drip
I change the script, perplexing text cranium overload, stress ya neck
This hex I rest stays with em, just embeds and annex respect.
Inspect the best, I smother guys sayin otherwise if you speakin of less
These knees to your chest you seep my disease ridden breath.
Deceivin I guess, I annihilate the who come to violate me
A violent beast when my hide arrives and eyes dilate, see.
Pacin myself at a clever rate so I can be forever great
And demolish the thoughtless featherweight that endeavors hate.
Cant sweat the race, set the track on fire lyrical arsonist
Crackin cartilage, advanced with my dance y’all on the starters kits.
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Re: Multi-Fest (tryin something new)

Postby classthe_king » Jan 5th, '10, 04:46

I agree with Coleon.

Even though you tried to put in a ton of multi's, they didn't seem like very good multi's. I would rather have some great multi's then a bunch of average multis.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Multi-Fest (tryin something new)

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 5th, '10, 06:10

Gotta say the same a few good multis and stuff just seemed a bit forced. I agree with class would rather see good smooth multis than forced ones. Good though man
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
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Re: Multi-Fest (tryin something new)

Postby Spyder » Jan 5th, '10, 19:40

ight ight keep ya panties on :smoking:
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