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32 Bars From Hell ft Solace

Postby Edge » Jan 7th, '10, 07:40

Edge:

fuck with me, i get to banging nerve walls
i smack u harder, than a hanging curve ball
so if i go to beat u down, best duck and fear
really dont try to put me to the test, fucken queer
gettin better by the day, week, month and year
lately my raps are even turning gunts to cheers
i gotta keep going, theres no way to slow down
people are finally enjoying how my flow sound
let me in the ring, it wont make it fo' (4) rounds
cause a knock out in the first, is how it goes down
im just one punch jabbin, and two punch hooking
i leave the body smelling like school lunch cooking
so crazy mother fucker dont try to mess with me
cause i drink ur blood, and ur flesh i feast
i give you some Solace, while u hang off the Edge
fake to help u up and than bang u with a sledge


Solace:

The same panic means life is repetitive like satanic screams,
To me at least I cause the peace to cease as I break down a fiend,
In the past I have passed your death, even I thought it's tragic yet,
No remorse, voice so hoarse when you felt the Automatic's breath,
I'm really cuttin' edge, no subliminals, oh you're so believing,
You're filled with no achieving so then your hope is reaching,
Like faith is mad, crazy sad so then it goes to smoke this evening,
Peer pressure never feels lesser yet for you there's no retreating,
Life? I don't know the meaning, I just like to show the beatings,
I got wack rappers dripping blood so their flow's increasing,
The truth bruh, I'm the illest motherfucker you ever knew of,
You try to be nasty and raw and yet you're already from the sewer,
Truth is you know you're useless when it all comes down to music,
I give to you a cardboard box and you call it home improvement,
You know it sucks how your flow is rough, this grass I will mow it up,
Weak shit I mean it, ain't needing a terrorist or Dre to blow it up.
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: 32 Bars From Hell ft Solace

Postby Relapse.LP » Jan 7th, '10, 07:42

Did Solace just collaborate with Edge? I thought you guys had mad beef.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: 32 Bars From Hell ft Solace

Postby Edge » Jan 7th, '10, 07:43

Relapse.LP wrote:Did Solace just collaborate with Edge? I thought you guys had mad beef.


haha its all good :y: feedback appreciated lol
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Re: 32 Bars From Hell ft Solace

Postby Edge » Jan 7th, '10, 08:00

Coleon wrote:Edge I hope you didn't bite anyone man

you've improved tons :y: good job

@ (this is on a different scale than edge cause you way better)

your lines are too long and the multis seem to reach for meaning but it was still an aight verse :y:


i dont bite... i do me
thanks for the feed :y:
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Re: 32 Bars From Hell ft Solace

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 7th, '10, 09:18

Yeah man egde you gettin to be sick bro. Keep collabin and take the help but the bigger cats and you'll be top tier in a bit. Good work yall.
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: 32 Bars From Hell ft Solace

Postby Edge » Jan 7th, '10, 18:49

Yah-hah wrote:Yeah man egde you gettin to be sick bro. Keep collabin and take the help but the bigger cats and you'll be top tier in a bit. Good work yall.


thanks man :y:
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Re: 32 Bars From Hell ft Solace

Postby Spyder » Jan 7th, '10, 21:04

tbh i didnt like it much, to me Edge used pretty basic rhyming
with a lot of random things almost to try to get a laugh out

gotta keep going, theres no way to slow down
people are finally enjoying how my flow sound
let me in the ring, it wont make it fo' (4) rounds
cause a knock out in the first, is how it goes down
im just one punch jabbin, and two punch hooking
i leave the body smelling like school lunch cooking

seems like you wanna make a punchline but cant...

youll get there man, its tough love ;)


as for Solace, your pieces are getting repetative. with each piece you drop i feel like i have read it before. your style never changes(from piece to piece) obviously the mechanics are there, good multies and such. but mix it up a bit :y:
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Re: 32 Bars From Hell ft Solace

Postby Element. » Jan 7th, '10, 23:23

nice keep it up :y:
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Re: 32 Bars From Hell ft Solace

Postby Edge » Jan 7th, '10, 23:58

Spyder wrote:tbh i didnt like it much, to me Edge used pretty basic rhyming
with a lot of random things almost to try to get a laugh out

gotta keep going, theres no way to slow down
people are finally enjoying how my flow sound
let me in the ring, it wont make it fo' (4) rounds
cause a knock out in the first, is how it goes down
im just one punch jabbin, and two punch hooking
i leave the body smelling like school lunch cooking

seems like you wanna make a punchline but cant...

youll get there man, its tough love ;)


as for Solace, your pieces are getting repetative. with each piece you drop i feel like i have read it before. your style never changes(from piece to piece) obviously the mechanics are there, good multies and such. but mix it up a bit :y:


thanks for the honesty lol
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Re: 32 Bars From Hell ft Solace

Postby Element. » Jan 8th, '10, 03:53

:coffee: :y:
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Re: 32 Bars From Hell ft Solace

Postby Solace » Jan 8th, '10, 04:05

Thanks all.

@Spyder, what else am I supposed to write about in a track about being lyrical..But its cool man I'm trying and this was a throwaway verse anyways so yeah lol
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Re: 32 Bars From Hell ft Solace

Postby Edge » Jan 8th, '10, 04:11

Solace wrote:Thanks all.

@Spyder, what else am I supposed to write about in a track about being lyrical..But its cool man I'm trying and this was a throwaway verse anyways so yeah lol


nice to know im worth a throw away verse :y:
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Re: 32 Bars From Hell ft Solace

Postby classthe_king » Jan 8th, '10, 04:12

Edge wrote:
Solace wrote:Thanks all.

@Spyder, what else am I supposed to write about in a track about being lyrical..But its cool man I'm trying and this was a throwaway verse anyways so yeah lol


nice to know im worth a throw away verse :y:


lol what do you expect, he collabed with you, be happy.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: 32 Bars From Hell ft Solace

Postby Edge » Jan 8th, '10, 04:14

classthe_king wrote:
Edge wrote:
Solace wrote:Thanks all.

@Spyder, what else am I supposed to write about in a track about being lyrical..But its cool man I'm trying and this was a throwaway verse anyways so yeah lol


nice to know im worth a throw away verse :y:


lol what do you expect, he collabed with you, be happy.


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