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Extreme Amounts of Evolution

Postby Edge » Jan 8th, '10, 04:39

Everything is changin, extreme amounts of evolution
problems with no solution, broken new years resolutions
marijuana smoke pollution, in plead for absolution
in need of restitution, im losin, waitin for my execution

before I start to write raps, I light up a cigarette
my words fuck u up when uv had no liquor yet
my emptied clip’l wet, u and the clique u claim
every time I light up, this fucken piffs insane
I swear to god I stick ya dame as I strip ya chain
reporters question me, they try to pick my brain
I take care of rats cause if u try to snitch that’s lame
I got something in this luger thatl twitch ya brain
ya membrane twitch cuz my pen game sick, I rip ya name
im tryin to get rich with fame, talk about switchin lanes,
used to get knocked, now im getting props, total lane swap
everyones hops on board, like when the train stops
I empty the gats clip until ur fucken brains pop
lift the world with a hoist and let the crane drop
than I sit and watch as the fucken earth turns
yal dug these holes, like a group of earth worms
my flow will first burn as I rock and shock the nation
someone call 9-1-1, need the doc for operation
cuz several blunts a day is just approximation
words r baking soda, ice, coke, crack rock creation
this is just a notice, if u wanna be nice, note this
yal fags r hopeless, ya best bet is to quote this

Everything is changin, extreme amounts of evolution
problems with no solution, broken new years resolutions
marijuana smoke pollution, in plead for absolution
in need of restitution, im losin, waitin for my execution

through my mind and rhymes is pure evolution
look at u tryin to get people for ur revolution
ur raps are weak and lame, nobody speaks ur name
all u hear is shrieks from pain, givin leaks to veins
ur rough on the edges, but I am smooth as silk
all I want is silence, and if u move ya killed
just smoked some chronic, now im to tripped to type
feelin fly like Clark Kent, smoke through kryptonite
blunt hittin nice and smooth, cause I flipped it right
agree with what I tell u, unless u want me to slit ya pipe
stuffin some piff in pipes, smoking up splifs all night
iv met ur type, u act all tuff, but ur quick to flight
did I pick it right? Cause I think I exposed the bitch in u
my lifes a video game, fuck with me I glitch ya crew
as im sippin brews I stitch and bruise u clowns up
Im startin from the bottom, im just building group up
I expose u pussies, pullin gowns up, just know I don’t fuck around
my names getting hot, when im in ya town, u better duck around
cause if I come to ya hood, best believe the glocks cocked
and time is of the essence, like the fucken clock stopped

Everything is changin, extreme amounts of evolution
problems with no solution, broken new years resolutions
marijuana smoke pollution, in plead for absolution
in need of restitution, im losin, waitin for my execution
be the best you can be, and if thats not good enough for people... than fuck em
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Re: Extreme Amounts of Evolution

Postby gutawafang » Jan 8th, '10, 04:50

constant multis. Awesome.

I find the flow nice.
my flow will first burn as I rock and shock the nation
someone call 9-1-1, need the doc for operation

i can dig this
just smoked some chronic, now im to tripped to type
feelin fly like Clark Kent, smoke through kryptonite

overall, nice punches too.
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Re: Extreme Amounts of Evolution

Postby Edge » Jan 8th, '10, 04:51

gutawafang wrote:constant multis. Awesome.

I find the flow nice.
my flow will first burn as I rock and shock the nation
someone call 9-1-1, need the doc for operation

i can dig this
just smoked some chronic, now im to tripped to type
feelin fly like Clark Kent, smoke through kryptonite

overall, nice punches too.


thanks man, i appreciate it :smoking:
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Re: Extreme Amounts of Evolution

Postby Relapse.LP » Jan 8th, '10, 04:52

gutawafang wrote:constant multis. Awesome.

I find the flow nice.
my flow will first burn as I rock and shock the nation
someone call 9-1-1, need the doc for operation

i can dig this
just smoked some chronic, now im to tripped to type
feelin fly like Clark Kent, smoke through kryptonite

overall, nice punches too.


The second part of that line seems very familiar from somewhere. :-k

But on a positive note, you're getting better. :y:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Extreme Amounts of Evolution

Postby Edge » Jan 8th, '10, 04:58

The second part of that line seems very familiar from somewhere. :-k


what do u mean?

But on a positive note, you're getting better. :y:


and thanks
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Re: Extreme Amounts of Evolution

Postby Edge » Jan 8th, '10, 05:00

Coleon wrote:you are learning how to put a song together quite nice

good multis and mechanics for the most part, cool subject matter

good chorus

overall it's a pretty nice stepping stone for your skill level :y:


glad u liked it :b:
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