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New Shit, no name

Postby James R. » Jan 21st, '09, 02:54

Verse 1-
In the expanse of the world we’re just mice on the grind
But for the glory I always put my life on the lines
Honestly I don’t think you’re the type to defy
A young mike in his prime, who’s bidin his time
I’m ridin for mine please don’t try to stop me dude
I’ll concentrate on your whole camp like nazi crews
Straight to the top, each spot I’m stopping through
Tryna be the best, man I got a lot to do
I’m unstoppable wit writin just try to believe
Tight verses make diamonds with whack rhymes in between
I be done made you wanna stop and restyle ya team
Write hits quick fuck the whole freestyle regime
My soul’s in this I’m a heart attack to death
In fact my whole notebook’s on cardiac arrest
Never spit a lie since I started rappin bet
It’s just gonna happen if you’re not attracted yet

Hook x2-
I keep a tight clique of dude’s that’ll blast for me
So you not sayin I’m the best is some blasphemy
Fuck around and lemme tell you where a bastard be
Wit his people callin 9-1-1

Verse 2-
I’m risin steady like an escalator
I got a lot of haters and speculators feelin left in danger
It seems I can’t rest or wake up without hearin tales
Of nearing hell through murder scenes it’s clear as bells
I shot his squad, I left ‘em wet, it’s easy
On the real they wanna test the tech like E3
Next thing you know their catchin jets and breathe easy
Getting robbed their necklace left their team freely
Deabtin shit for letting words escape your lips
God forbid you end up another takin clips
Straight from makin hits now let’s get a proper view
Would you like him buried or burned ma’am, it’s optional
Wonder what his block’ll do write his goals on a wall
Another soldier to fall for holdin his balls
But that’s all you got along wit your promises
Next time hit the floor if you can’t show your dominance

Hook x2-
I keep a tight clique of dude’s that’ll blast for me
So you not sayin I’m the best is some blasphemy
Fuck around and lemme tell you where a bastard be
Wit his people callin 9-1-1

It’s hard livin regardless if it’s god givin
But that’s until it’s taken away so stop bitchin
Y’all kiddin actin like you wouldn’t sell your soul
Just to smell your goal, or be left in failure’s hold
For most people failure’s not even a choice
As long as I’m breathin or I’m still speakin a voice
I rhyme with diligence through towns and villages
Profound abilities with divine deliverance
Cuz I’m significant I can’t let myself down
Fly away and all alone in my wealth drown
Cuz for sure allure could have your life poor
No matter how much you leavin on the strip club floor
I won’t lie I want the Bentley’s and jewelry
But I’ll be damned if the game tempts me and fools me
I have to get there cuz my plan is in gear
You can’t stop me until I’m rockin Madison Square

Hook x2-
I keep a tight clique of dude’s that’ll blast for me
So you not sayin I’m the best is some blasphemy
Fuck around and lemme tell you where a bastard be
Wit his people callin 9-1-1
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Re: New Shit, no name

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 21st, '09, 03:33

good drop James, however i have to say that is not the best i've seen but who cares really, this is a nice piece, great to see u finally drop something again :y: :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: New Shit, no name

Postby James R. » Jan 21st, '09, 03:43

Thanks both of you for checkin and leavin feed.
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Re: New Shit, no name

Postby Purple23Haze » Jan 21st, '09, 04:11

I leave some feed :wave:
























That was pretty damn dope dude
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Re: New Shit, no name

Postby James R. » Jan 21st, '09, 04:11

Thanks man^
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Re: New Shit, no name

Postby Myszon » Jan 21st, '09, 09:27

yeee James, it's damn good lyric.. :worship:
'Shady Records was eighty seconds away from the towers
Some cowards fucked wit the wrong building, they meant to hit ours'
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Re: New Shit, no name

Postby mcZu » Jan 21st, '09, 15:09

Loved the flow on this one, seemed flawless. Lyrics were nicly structured and the rhyming was superb.
Overall a nice piece bro, def one you should reconsider recording :y:
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Re: New Shit, no name

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 21st, '09, 16:07

James R. wrote:Verse 1-
In the expanse of the world we’re just mice on the grind
But for the glory I always put my life on the lines
Honestly I don’t think you’re the type to defy
A young mike in his prime, who’s bidin his time
My soul’s in this I’m a heart attack to death
In fact my whole notebook’s on cardiac arrest
Never spit a lie since I started rappin bet
It’s just gonna happen if you’re not attracted yet
Hook x2-
I keep a tight clique of dude’s that’ll blast for me
So you not sayin I’m the best is some blasphemy
Fuck around and lemme tell you where a bastard be
Wit his people callin 9-1-1

Verse 2-
I’m risin steady like an escalator
I got a lot of haters and speculators feelin left in danger
It seems I can’t rest or wake up without hearin tales
Of nearing hell through murder scenes it’s clear as bells
I shot his squad, I left ‘em wet, it’s easy
Getting robbed their necklace left their team freely
Straight from makin hits now let’s get a proper view
Would you like him buried or burned ma’am, it’s optional
Wonder what his block’ll do write his goals on a wall
Another soldier to fall for holdin his balls
But that’s all you got along wit your promises
Next time hit the floor if you can’t show your dominance
Hook x2-
I keep a tight clique of dude’s that’ll blast for me
So you not sayin I’m the best is some blasphemy
Fuck around and lemme tell you where a bastard be
Wit his people callin 9-1-1

It’s hard livin regardless if it’s god givin
But that’s until it’s taken away so stop bitchin
Y’all kiddin actin like you wouldn’t sell your soul
Just to smell your goal, or be left in failure’s hold
For most people failure’s not even a choice
As long as I’m breathin or I’m still speakin a voice
I rhyme with diligence through towns and villages
Profound abilities with divine deliverance
Cuz I’m significant I can’t let myself down
Fly away and all alone in my wealth drown
Cuz for sure allure could have your life poor
No matter how much you leavin on the strip club floor
I won’t lie I want the Bentley’s and jewelry
But I’ll be damned if the game tempts me and fools me
I have to get there cuz my plan is in gear
You can’t stop me until I’m rockin Madison Square
Hook x2-
I keep a tight clique of dude’s that’ll blast for me
So you not sayin I’m the best is some blasphemy
Fuck around and lemme tell you where a bastard be
Wit his people callin 9-1-1


wow james this is so so sick man , really, i liked it all and i enjoyed reading it alot , i love these lines , they are full of emotions and feeling , i can feel what you are trying to say ,, the hook is sick really nice it's dope , lyrics and rhymes are wonderful ,, i say it before and i'm gonna say it again, you're the fucking best in here .. i really want to see from you a romantic piece .. i know you will just killed it . amazing job here james .. 10/10 .. gd luck bro :y: :b: :b:, really keep writing
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Re: New Shit, no name

Postby Arabian Shady » Jan 21st, '09, 19:01

sick shit yo, flow was on lock and rhymes were fantastic :y:
wiked
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Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: New Shit, no name

Postby James R. » Jan 21st, '09, 21:13

Thanks a lot for checkin it everybody. I appreciate it.

@z_em my next piece I post will be a romantic piece. just gotta find the beat that speaks to me
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Re: New Shit, no name

Postby shadysonlygirl » Jan 21st, '09, 22:10

That was really good James R.

Keep it up
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Re: New Shit, no name

Postby James R. » Jan 22nd, '09, 02:36

^Thanks :)
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Re: New Shit, no name

Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 22nd, '09, 02:55

dude there is no stopping you so get it man :y:
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Re: New Shit, no name

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 22nd, '09, 13:16

James R. wrote:Thanks a lot for checkin it everybody. I appreciate it.

@z_em my next piece I post will be a romantic piece. just gotta find the beat that speaks to me


wow , i'm really looking forward for it. find the beat ASAP ,,, i'm waiting for your next drop .. :y:
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Re: New Shit, no name

Postby James R. » Jan 22nd, '09, 16:41

Rain Matrix wrote:dude there is no stopping you so get it man :y:

Hahah thanks man

And I'm gonna try to find the beat today. Hopefully write it by the weekend. No promises, but I'm gonna try.
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