Change - TWO Full verses + Hook - NEW!

[Slim Zaddy]

imafoo. McMaybe , nice shit , loved all the lines, especially she's only sixteen dream of penises.. good shit man , flow is dope , as audio it's fire . i love the hook too . gd job homie . i wanna hear it

[MC Anonymous]

This is for a mixtape verse on someones album I'm Ft'ing on.

HOOK
Change, I don't see it but I feel that it's close...
Go, change... I don't see it but I feel it approaching...
Oh, change... I don't think we have the right to be wrong...
Change, but I know it has the right to be done...
We need change. X2

VERSE
Industry's a skin disease, they quickly switch appearances,
I fear defeat, she's sixteen, already dreams of penises...
I mean it sick.. they try to conceal it like it's a paper cut...
lying to my face, saying myspace never made a slut..?
make a front.. say it chump, watch all the haters come..
sharper than a college goddess crotch is full of razor bumps..
I hate this one, it's as passive as a magic trick is...
pass the picture round the class.. kids, it's not an action figure..
a "fashionistic" passion is the tactic.. now imagine this..
your daughter lifts her mattress instant access to her plastic dick..
it's tragic... But the internet is something to view...
click click... now experiment with substance abuse...
shuffle the tunes, all you listeners are given this idol..
it's noise fed a voice edit... now it's digital Midol...
she has guys all violent for her... masking your burglary..
of talent with a balance of cash... and plastic surgery...

This brings reality into a whole new level, I loved it man, flow was excellent as usual, lyrical content was A+, subject matter was raw, I really enjoyed this man. One of your better drops. 10/10

[Slim Zaddy]

the second verse was sick too , flow is fire , concept was there ,, pretty sick lines there . but i still liked the 1st verse more,,

[MC Anonymous]

This shit is excellent, everything flowed with each other seamlessly, and the Anonymity surrounding it made me smile. I'm glad someone else can write like that too Metaphors in it is what shined the most, and I sense that is what you were focusing on. 10/10 as always, keeping your spotless record...

[SajN]

Damn nice dawg!
Flowed really good!

good job!


Could you check out my lil piece.. named Happy Birthday.

[AOBrien09]

Am new to this site but not to this sort of thing like battlin and cyphers I've done that stuff on other sites but man that was sick, everything about it was good the flow, the concept, the ryhmes etc. Love It

[The GameKeeper]

You keep getting better and better bro... the sky is the limit for you my man. This is definitely one of, if not the best shit I have read from you.

[Xray]

It was a good read, hope you wrote this to a really good beat, cause it'd sound good if you used something like a hard hitting drum beat. Good shit.

[Xray]

It was a good read, hope you wrote this to a really good beat, cause it'd sound good if you used something like a hard hitting drum beat. Good shit.

Thanks. And YES EXACTLY man. I wrote it to a Russian beat that Asprine sent me.. Something like a low volume melody, hard snare and kicks.

Nice, looking forward to hearing the audio.

[JMG]

killed it.

[4D]

Best I've ever read from you man. Really really good, rhymes were strong keeping the multies while also staying on the subject, the subject matter and observations were topical, interesting and witty. The flow was flawless you almost have to rap it to read it, it's that easy flowing. Only thing I'm not convinced about is the hook. But, maybe that would all change when hearing the finished track. First verse best thing I've read on here in a long time!

10/10

[4D]

Best I've ever read from you man. Really really good, rhymes were strong keeping the multies while also staying on the subject, the subject matter and observations were topical, interesting and witty. The flow was flawless you almost have to rap it to read it, it's that easy flowing. Only thing I'm not convinced about is the hook. But, maybe that would all change when hearing the finished track. First verse best thing I've read on here in a long time!

10/10

Damn man. DAMN. Thanks a lot. It means a ton coming from you, I still consider you one of the top text rappers I've ever known.

Thanks man. I'm not sure "top text rapper" is an accolade I'm gonna put on my CV or brag about from a hilltop, but I know on here it's a skill that's respected, so I appreciate that. Keep doing your stuff man, you've always been a talented rapper, it's great that your writing has now caught up to the same standard you have in your delivery.

[J Roc]

Hahaha Mannn ..... I Didn't Read Your Verses in a longgg Time , IMO they Suckked lol , No Hate Just My Oppiniun .. But This Was Ill The Flow , Multies .. lol Everything was Just Crazyy , Specifically liked the first verse lol

[threeandtwenty]

killer ..should get it on a beat though,coz audio is audio.

[Solace]

^That's fucking good to hear cause I loved this piece (I never really wanted to comment, cause if I just said I loved it it'd feel like I didn't read it nor care to talk about flow or vocabulary etc.). But yes, this piece is dope and I'd love to hear any part of this in audio