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NEW SOLACE - Have An Epiphany [Full Piece]

Postby Solace » Apr 8th, '09, 03:34

[Introduction]
Name dropping? Nah. I rather call it free advertising...Haha.

[Verse 1]
So Mr. Solace stopped writing for just a little while,
Stuck with big smile, fucking 'round like that prick Kyle,
Bodacious, whore aching to fuck her imaginations,
"50 Cent's my best friend", Like that's the situation,
Hearts racing, bones aching to play, ready to rap,
Getting ready to snap; sitting getting ready to crack,
Chilling as I linguistically express myself, in a wild resort,
Like my excuse for a father who can't pay child support, (Haha)
This shit's easy to me, unlike that wackass netcee,
Mook Mook, down the toilet where his fucking rep be,
Some people improve, but it's either he's retarded,
Or these are his first months writing, trying to start shit,
Lee O Mac's mouth is like a laser which is beaming crap,
This dudes shit makes me want to listen to a Weezy track.

[Chorus x2]
So who's this? Who's that? Motherfuckers it's Solace,
A con artist like Kon Artis who needs to get demolished,
Getting an instant buzz, a rapid high from within me,
I'd like to chill back, offer drinks, have an epiphany.

[Verse 2]
Got from complaining, to dissing, to name dropping,
Got from aiming at the ground to fame popping,
So, Young Luc, "Shit I used to rap crazy good before,
In another forum, my lyrics were overused like a whore",
But seriously man your the essence of wack writing,
Of wack rapping, so Solace simply spat nicely,
Almost as bad as PurpleHaze, duplicate account?
Because both of you two are too damn stupid to count,
No Luc, I ain't a hater, I tell the truth, you just hate it,
That shit can faze you, enrage you, just stop complaining,
Oh wait? No way? What happened to Mister Bitch-A-Lot,
I mean Le Trashcan, Transexual, Mister Miss-A-Lot,
This whole world is filled with wack rhymers, sea to sea,
Pissed off they don't improve while they're reading me.

[Chorus x2]
So who's this? Who's that? Motherfuckers it's Solace,
A con artist like Kon Artis who needs to get demolished,
Getting an instant buzz, a rapid high from within me,
I'd like to chill back, offer drinks, have an epiphany.

[Outro]
Haha...Get the fuck outta here. Learn to rap, come back and you can try to write a decent piece...Shit.
Last edited by Solace on Apr 9th, '09, 02:40, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: NEW SOLACE - Have An Epiphany

Postby Requiem » Apr 8th, '09, 21:50

really loved the feel of this, the flow was nice, and the rhymes were pretty strong. the namedropping was pretty :o too.

nice punches in there man, lyrically its one of ur best pieces :y: 8/10
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Re: NEW SOLACE - Have An Epiphany

Postby Solace » Apr 8th, '09, 21:51

Thanks :) Didn't expect it to be called one of my best lyrical pieces, cause that just means my other pieces were shit :o Thanks again :smoking:
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Re: NEW SOLACE - Have An Epiphany

Postby mcZu » Apr 8th, '09, 21:52

Liked it; rhyme-scheme was good, flow seemd flawless and the name-dropping was pretty hilarious.
Good job :y:
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Re: NEW SOLACE - Have An Epiphany

Postby Solace » Apr 8th, '09, 21:56

Thanks mr 26th letter :smoking:
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Re: NEW SOLACE - Have An Epiphany

Postby Solace » Apr 8th, '09, 22:06

Coleon wrote:damn I liked it :y:

so many quotes I liked lol :y:

Thanks haha

Chet Starr wrote:lyrics/punches = dope shit, more then I can do...


not much else to say, since it was really just a punch filled verse...but a dope one :y:

good job you fucking 14 year old :angry:

Thanks for checking it man, glad you liked it :sweating:
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Re: NEW SOLACE - Have An Epiphany [Full Piece]

Postby Solace » Apr 9th, '09, 02:41

*Edited the piece; only slightly longer
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Re: NEW SOLACE - Have An Epiphany [Full Piece]

Postby Solace » Apr 9th, '09, 02:58

Who knows, maybe I will eventually :shifty:
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Re: NEW SOLACE - Have An Epiphany [Full Piece]

Postby neversnooze » Apr 11th, '09, 03:45

it was pretty cool and funny Solace, it had that eminem vibe in it. flow was good 9/10
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Re: NEW SOLACE - Have An Epiphany [Full Piece]

Postby Solace » Apr 11th, '09, 03:48

Thanks bro :flower:
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Re: NEW SOLACE - Have An Epiphany [Full Piece]

Postby Solace » Apr 11th, '09, 15:52

McMaybe wrote:I thought I commented.. Hmm. Anyway, great stuff man. Really great. I personally loved it. 9/10

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Thanks dude :sweating:
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Re: NEW SOLACE - Have An Epiphany [Full Piece]

Postby Robbie G » Apr 11th, '09, 16:14

Good as usual. You have this down, now for audio. :smoking:
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Re: NEW SOLACE - Have An Epiphany [Full Piece]

Postby Solace » Apr 11th, '09, 16:16

Shady Babie wrote:Good as usual. You have this down, now for audio. :smoking:

This piece got a lot more positive feed than I expected. Thanks dude.

'Cept im still not satisfied with my writing; gotta improve :unsure:
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Re: NEW SOLACE - Have An Epiphany [Full Piece]

Postby Robbie G » Apr 12th, '09, 04:06

Yeah man...just try to be as original as you can. :y:
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Re: NEW SOLACE - Have An Epiphany [Full Piece]

Postby Solace » Apr 12th, '09, 04:22

Yeah :smoking:
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