Yo I kick it, mysterious

[Xray]

Yo I kick it, mysterious, no one ever notices
known to no idiots, Heist keep it serious
sessions bleeding so furious, unfuckable lyricist
can't fuck with me, period... Full stop now.
Inherited these music notes, my music seize no limits, yes
preach to address, that, I could give a fuck less
about success, unless I'm blessed, so till then I'm des-
tined, destined the shit.
I'm about to unleash the reign of my rhymes
A pain greater then sars
and watch the whole world flood. Written in blood.
As the whole fuckin' world sail, a Titanic fail
heart at will, a plan build to kill
I can make you a cut, let you in if you want
rhymin' makin' you jump
cause your fucking with a rapper with a pogo sticks
And if you really want, really really want
I can switch my flow, and make you think your trampoline spits

New verse, for that song I was working on, decided to remove my previous verse. I think this one destroys the other one. Let me know what you think of it, please. Thanks.

[Xray]

couldn't give a fuck less about success ..

don't bite eminem.

Wtf bro? I had no intention in biting off Eminem whatsoever, and if I said the same shit he said once, then there's no coincidence beside the fact we share the same view on success? And that line can pop up in anybody's mind, so no I didn't bite shit. Can't believe you actually think that shit is considered biting, I mean seriously? that line? whatever man think what you want, I don't give a fuck lol.

[Xray]

well it is identical to the way he said it ..
other than that, good piece.

If you say so, but now I'm curious to how he said it cause I already recorded my shit.

Mind linking me to that song or something?

[Solace]

well it is identical to the way he said it ..
other than that, good piece.

no..

sajjad: couldnt give a fuck less about success

eminem: i used to give a fuck, now i could give a fuck less, what do i think of success? it sucks, too much to stress

eminems song was Im Back btw sajjad

[Solace]

then why not say he bit jay z

jay z: i used to give a fuck, now i could give a fuck less, what do i think of success? it sucks, too much to stress

still very similar but w.e.

[Solace]

Yeah but I like being annoying to people on TR lol

And to not be so off topic i liked the piece man

[Xray]

Haha thanks Solace.

[classthe_king]

I agree, this song is dope, alot better then before.

And you could say that em bit himself. In open mic he used a line similar to that too.

[Solace]

^That's not called biting yourself it's called recycling.

[classthe_king]

haha yeah I know...

[James R.]

I enjoyed the entire piece. Good job in all aspects. I liked the flow a lot. Probably my favorite aspect of the song.

Scott you act like rappers all over the place never borrow lines. Nas took a line directly from Rakim "I'm the R the A to the KIM if I wasn't then why would I say I am" Nas- "I'm the N the A to the SIR if I wasn't I must have been escobar." It's just something that happens especially with someone that a rapper looks up to. Obviously Sajjad likes Em. And that's just a very common view to have about success and that line puts it very well.

[classthe_king]

I enjoyed the entire piece. Good job in all aspects. I liked the flow a lot. Probably my favorite aspect of the song.

Scott you act like rappers all over the place never borrow lines. Nas took a line directly from Rakim "I'm the R the A to the KIM if I wasn't then why would I say I am" Nas- "I'm the N the A to the SIR if I wasn't I must have been escobar." It's just something that happens especially with someone that a rapper looks up to. Obviously Sajjad likes Em. And that's just a very common view to have about success and that line puts it very well.

Isn't that Rakim line was inspired the chorus to the way i am?

[J Roc]

I enjoyed the entire piece. Good job in all aspects. I liked the flow a lot. Probably my favorite aspect of the song.

Scott you act like rappers all over the place never borrow lines. Nas took a line directly from Rakim "I'm the R the A to the KIM if I wasn't then why would I say I am" Nas- "I'm the N the A to the SIR if I wasn't I must have been escobar." It's just something that happens especially with someone that a rapper looks up to. Obviously Sajjad likes Em. And that's just a very common view to have about success and that line puts it very well.

Hah Word i used a line playing off that

"He the "N,A" To the "S-I-R"? ... Nah Sir! So He Musta Been Escobar"

Same Shit But i made it a wordplay

Pluss i thought of this Nicee ass Line ... then i Hear Cass used The Concept so i justt Deleted it

Im a Cereal Killer, I Pop Like Rice Crispie

Fuckk ...


Pointt is There's only so many lines in Hip Hop And Alot of them is already used 1 Time or another ... Shit happens .

[James R.]

I enjoyed the entire piece. Good job in all aspects. I liked the flow a lot. Probably my favorite aspect of the song.

Scott you act like rappers all over the place never borrow lines. Nas took a line directly from Rakim "I'm the R the A to the KIM if I wasn't then why would I say I am" Nas- "I'm the N the A to the SIR if I wasn't I must have been escobar." It's just something that happens especially with someone that a rapper looks up to. Obviously Sajjad likes Em. And that's just a very common view to have about success and that line puts it very well.

Isn't that Rakim line was inspired the chorus to the way i am?

Oh yeah I think you're right

[gutawafang]

Fucking good flow, period.