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Do The Cancer Patient

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 17th, '09, 06:51

I'm going to hell for this....sorry for those it offends but I thought of it and it was just a joke...no structure or multis or any deep meaning....



I'm an emo cause I'm on kemo,
Stuck in a hospital bed, watching Finding Nemo,
I'm getting money from United Way,
I have to take pills twice a day,
The preacher said I should probably pray,
To God, or maybe Jesus Christ,
I'm a bald fuck, no worry about lice,
Please sir my cancer is killing me,
The doctor keeps feelling me,
Trying to feel my flabby cancer breasts,
Saying I have to suck his dick for the results of my tests,
I'm just gonna sit and cry, and slowly die,
....
and do the--



(Acts like I have razor to my head)
Do the cancer patient, do-the do-the cancer patient,
Cancer patient, do-the do-th cancer patient,
Do the cancer patient, do-the do-the cancer patient,
Cancer patient, do-the do-th cancer patient,
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Re: Do The Cancer Patient

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 17th, '09, 07:14

Fa-Q wrote:I'm going to hell for this....sorry for those it offends but I thought of it and it was just a joke...no structure or multis or any deep meaning....



I'm an emo cause I'm on kemo,
Stuck in a hospital bed, watching Finding Nemo,

I'm getting money from United Way,
I have to take pills twice a day,
The preacher said I should probably pray,
To God, or maybe Jesus Christ,
I'm a bald fuck, no worry about lice,
Please sir my cancer is killing me,
The doctor keeps feelling me,
Trying to feel my flabby cancer breasts,
Saying I have to suck his dick for the results of my tests,
I'm just gonna sit and cry, and slowly die,
....
and do the--



(Acts like I have razor to my head)
Do the cancer patient, do-the do-the cancer patient,
Cancer patient, do-the do-th cancer patient,
Do the cancer patient, do-the do-the cancer patient,
Cancer patient, do-the do-th cancer patient,


I recall that part from Drake's verse in "Forever".

And you didn't offend me personally, but the content is repulsive, no offense. Good structure and flow though. :y:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Do The Cancer Patient

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 17th, '09, 07:22

Lol yea relapse it was just a joke... It took me like 2 minutes
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Re: Do The Cancer Patient

Postby Relapse.LP » Nov 17th, '09, 07:29

Fa-Q wrote:Lol yea relapse it was just a joke... It took me like 2 minutes


I know. :flower:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Do The Cancer Patient

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 17th, '09, 13:20

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OH MY GOD. I saw the title as I was scrolling down and saw it was you and I thought to myself, 'Here we go he's gonna piss someone off and it's gonna be so awesome' :p Dude funniest one oh my god. The title made me laugh. I can totally see you on the chorus with a razor hahahahahaha nicely done homie :worship:
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Re: Do The Cancer Patient

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 17th, '09, 13:41

Lol Just....I thought of stopping and taking time with it but god I felt so disatisfied after this song....lol its so sad....where is my demented mind at
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Re: Do The Cancer Patient

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 17th, '09, 14:07

In hell where people like you go LOL
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Re: Do The Cancer Patient

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 17th, '09, 15:01

I'm all battle rapping Satan and his demons are the crowd...."You look human, all these people food your consumin" OOoOOOOOoOOOoO *demons*
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Re: Do The Cancer Patient

Postby MCyobi » Nov 17th, '09, 17:43

It made me laugh,nice multies
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Re: Do The Cancer Patient

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 17th, '09, 20:10

Lol what multis??
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Re: Do The Cancer Patient

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 17th, '09, 20:12

Fa-Q wrote:Lol what multis??


United Way
Twice a day
sounds like a multi to me
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Do The Cancer Patient

Postby mcZu » Nov 17th, '09, 20:55

Scott M wrote::angry: my mum has cancer.

That's not even funny Scott, if it was a joke...

And, yeah, kinda funny, not my type of lyrics, but w.e. because I know a girl who had cancer... But keep doing your thing.
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Re: Do The Cancer Patient

Postby mcZu » Nov 17th, '09, 21:03

Scott M wrote:
mcZu wrote:
Scott M wrote::angry: my mum has cancer.

That's not even funny Scott, if it was a joke...

And, yeah, kinda funny, not my type of lyrics, but w.e. because I know a girl who had cancer... But keep doing your thing.


it's not a joke, my mum has leukaemia, she's had it since i was 17.

I see, I would say sorry but from experience I know that aint the right thing to say. So, all I can say is, I hope she's dealing with it the best way she can.
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Re: Do The Cancer Patient

Postby Fa-Q » Nov 17th, '09, 21:05

Damn sorry Scott
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Re: Do The Cancer Patient

Postby Yah-hah » Nov 17th, '09, 21:19

Yeah man don't let it stop you............from doin the Cancer Patient LMAO
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Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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