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You're Wack, Face It.

Postby Solace » Feb 21st, '10, 01:53

Jus' on a rap that's burnin' I almost feel bad to murk him,
I'm thinking "Could somebody that wack deserve this?"
Always unoriginal saying I'm faggot is all that mister write,
He's staring, glaring, on my dick like my name was Mr. Right,
Like his mom on mics he sucks, in CW he ain't typing much,
Opposite of his fights is tough, seeming like the type to bluff,
I guess I was just the writer that he always had liked too much,
But like volleyball he'll be out as if I had spiked the punch,
Like a feather he's light to touch, now he's back to backing off,
Cannon at your door, bring the Drama like Asher Roth,
Your raps mad suck, not to mention ya name is wack as fuck,
Fake lines, you on ya period? No wonder they was acting up,
Your mind will stop though your typer's not,
Say you tight? The way you write is like full time writers block,
The jealous bitch? The job blow? What is you on, hoe?
Stay out 'cause ya more played out than a blonde joke.

*Waits for Kosovic to troll, lol.
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Re: You're Wack, Face It.

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Feb 21st, '10, 01:57

Awww, Solace is in love.
Do to others whatever you would like them to do to you. This is the essence of all that is taught in the law and the prophets.
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Re: You're Wack, Face It.

Postby DƎRDYPK » Feb 21st, '10, 01:59

pretty nice stuff DJ Omar Oh :smoking:
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Re: You're Wack, Face It.

Postby Solace » Feb 21st, '10, 02:03

GoodGirlsGetGutted wrote:Awww, Solace is in love.

Why?

DerdyPK wrote:pretty nice stuff DJ Omar Oh :smoking:

You don't even care that I dissed you in my previous piece. I'm disappointed in you. :shakehead:
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Re: You're Wack, Face It.

Postby Fa-Q » Feb 21st, '10, 02:11

Who's this about
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Re: You're Wack, Face It.

Postby Solace » Feb 21st, '10, 02:12

You can find it if you read it. I put in something that hints at the username. Now, did you like it any bit? Most of it was keyed, but I'm trying to keep the name out so I wanted to post it.
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Re: You're Wack, Face It.

Postby Solace » Feb 21st, '10, 02:21

No, he's my nig. And...he doesn't write that much, does he? :unsure:
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Re: You're Wack, Face It.

Postby DƎRDYPK » Feb 21st, '10, 02:29

Solace wrote:
DerdyPK wrote:pretty nice stuff DJ Omar Oh :smoking:

You don't even care that I dissed you in my previous piece. I'm disappointed in you. :shakehead:


I'm disappointed in myself :shakehead:
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Re: You're Wack, Face It.

Postby Spyder » Feb 21st, '10, 03:39

i liked it bro

cant really figure out who its about. Mr Right i feel has somethng to do with it...

im not on the ball tonight :coffee:
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Re: You're Wack, Face It.

Postby Solace » Feb 21st, '10, 04:47

Thanks Spy. :smoking:
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Re: You're Wack, Face It.

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 21st, '10, 13:01

I thought it was pretty dope. yeah I cant figure out who its bout though
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: You're Wack, Face It.

Postby Spyder » Feb 21st, '10, 18:21

just saw the name in there, clever :shifty:
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Re: You're Wack, Face It.

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 21st, '10, 18:29

Yeah I see drama but he is cool. IDK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pm me Spyder
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: You're Wack, Face It.

Postby Solace » Feb 21st, '10, 20:04

Thanks Yah-Hah for feeding. And I don't see the big deal of figuring it out, but hell you can keep trying if you want. I should get around to keying more disses until he/she/it gets it.
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Re: You're Wack, Face It.

Postby Spyder » Feb 21st, '10, 20:34

should capatilize it, then maybe theyd figure it out :coffee:
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