Keeping It Real - Steven Ft Sentus and BILI.

[BILI]

^^First post was deleted cause Steven posted it and now his account is deleted.

Here`s Stevens and my part,dont have Sentus tho(he`ll prolly post it):

Steven:

Always had a passion for writing but i supressed it,
Then my name gets requested to collab with the bestest,
The freshest, Need to take my time and invest it,
Triple check every line.. this verse is making me restless,
Breathless, Cause i wanna be as lyrical,
BILI and Sentus on track..things may get physical,
We dont hold back... or be subliminal,
And if everything you cats say is fact why do i still feel like killing you,
(Check it) Fortune teller verse cause its back to the point at hand,
Rap is getting worse and i dont think you understand,
For me its about lyrics for you its about whos the man!!,
(LOOK) forget all that swag and that fag shit,
Teenagers pants sagging caught up in this saga so tragic,
I avoid the traffic cause the music that i listen to has such a narrow passage,
Maybe its force of habbit, I just throw on a jacket,
Hip-Hops cold now and all we have left are a few matchsticks.

BILI:

My flow on the mic is tight son,see it knocks hard
Dont wanna chicken?so eat cocks tard
Time to take the throne,its the return of the kings
Lil taste of the blood,thats how my habit beggins
Its my man Sentus,but you`re just another scabby slug
Slow flow,whack lyrics,another wannabe thug
Got my boy Steve,bitch no fuckin nerds here
Stuck in a troglodyte mode,its undeterred fear
You think my raps whack?Well I respect that
But I wont step back,yo brain?Time to smack that
Rap is more then just music,but fake rappers abuse it
Bad skill,we can reduce it,step up,no more excuses
Think you`re ready for it?Complete the task then
Fuck the beef,I`m hungry enough to eat your concept
You woudn`t be shit even if I dropped you in my toilet
Time to destroy net,we`re not scarred of yo lil boys threat

[Sir_Machete']

Ah no wonder, alright not a bad collabo fellaz... Steven came with a real solid rhyme scheme that made it flow real audio like Bili bro you came more with punchlines which i give you mad props on, the flow wasn't that bad neither. I honestly couldn't pick who was better seeing i love punches/raw flow. Now i got Sentus verse >>

I don't have the rough draft I posted on here (I always post rough drafts on here then finish the verses after I get feed) but this is the final version

I’m back for praise; so sick in my rap displays
My throwaways are buried as radioactive waste
When I craft this blaze you know it’s all art
I got a raw heart when I maul cops like Paul Blart
I’ll bring the pain down for a payday
Test me; I don’t need a rain cloud to get a Grade A
I’m like shrooms when I get near the fire
Cause if you bite me then your career gets higher
This ain’t another dirty south deposit
I call you a Monster cause you came out the closet
You’ll toss ya nine, step up and cross the line
Stupid motherfucker must’ve lost ya mind
I’m endin the lives of fakers pretendin they wise
I make these rappers hide like I skinned em alive
So call me Al-Shoaibi; I’m the sickest rapper left
Kill me and I’ll still flip on you . . . after death

Dope wordplay's man, good rhyme scheme throughout. Solid punches here and there as well, You and BILI were my favorite drops... Overall all together 9.3/10

[BILI]

thx alot man

[classthe_king]

I don't have the rough draft I posted on here (I always post rough drafts on here then finish the verses after I get feed) but this is the final version

I’m back for praise; so sick in my rap displays
My throwaways are buried as radioactive waste
When I craft this blaze you know it’s all art
I got a raw heart when I maul cops like Paul Blart
I’ll bring the pain down for a payday
Test me; I don’t need a rain cloud to get a Grade A
I’m like shrooms when I get near the fire
Cause if you bite me then your career gets higher
This ain’t another dirty south deposit
I call you a Monster cause you came out the closet
You’ll toss ya nine, step up and cross the line
Stupid motherfucker must’ve lost ya mind
I’m endin the lives of fakers pretendin they wise
I make these rappers hide like I skinned em alive
So call me Al-Shoaibi; I’m the sickest rapper left
Kill me and I’ll still flip on you . . . after death

[Xray]

^^^Dude I love your writings no homo, such a sexy verse.
That's just pure violence. Some crazy lines there.

Btw I can't see the first post, same with a couple of other threads to. -.-

[BILI]

^^^Dude I love your writings no homo, such a sexy verse.
That's just pure violence. Some crazy lines there.

Btw I can't see the first post, same with a couple of other threads to. -.-

Its cause Steven deleted his account

[remy3x]

I don't have the rough draft I posted on here (I always post rough drafts on here then finish the verses after I get feed) but this is the final version

I’m back for praise; so sick in my rap displays
My throwaways are buried as radioactive waste
When I craft this blaze you know it’s all art
I got a raw heart when I maul cops like Paul Blart
I’ll bring the pain down for a payday
Test me; I don’t need a rain cloud to get a Grade A
I’m like shrooms when I get near the fire
Cause if you bite me then your career gets higher
This ain’t another dirty south deposit
I call you a Monster cause you came out the closet
You’ll toss ya nine, step up and cross the line
Stupid motherfucker must’ve lost ya mind
I’m endin the lives of fakers pretendin they wise
I make these rappers hide like I skinned em alive
So call me Al-Shoaibi; I’m the sickest rapper left
Kill me and I’ll still flip on you . . . after death

Great verse. I just compared it to the 'rough draft' and I like the beginning in this one a lot more.

[classthe_king]

Haha thank you

[Sir_Machete']

niceeee, i just edited for the whole feed.

[Arabian Shady]

That was just surreal!!!!! i thought steven and class killed that shit!!! that was fukin UNBELIEVABLE!!!
Im like astounded,lol steve came soooo far ahead man, daym
class was fukin incredible, bili's shit oozed swag fo' realz
Sick shit ya'l!!

[classthe_king]

Haha thanks guys

[classthe_king]

I'm bumpin this up

Cause Steven decided to be a fuck and delete his account it's not at the top page anymore but look a couple posts up and you'll see our verses.

Look for this to be recorded soon too

Pyromaniacs

[VenomBlackViper]

Did you guys actually record this or just write it out? dope shit BTW.

[BILI]

Did you guys actually record this or just write it out? dope shit BTW.

Nah man...we didnt record it...thx for checking it tho

[VenomBlackViper]

Did you guys actually record this or just write it out? dope shit BTW.

Nah man...we didnt record it...thx for checking it tho

No prob you & Sentus are dope, Ive checked out some of his shit on youtube do you got any recorded songs?