It will be a lovesong...

[ek_iz_backk]

hey that was a clever team effort poem u 2 wrote, ver funny

[ThomasAguanis]

thats 16 lines we need a hook

carmelita this may sound dumb to some
but when you look at me i become numb and unglum
don't even look at my penis..i'm gonna cu...cum!!
as much as i love you CAR-ME-LETA
i prefer to beat of because my PALM IS BETTER
that purple gay font is hard to read
carmeleta come here give my dick a squeeze
when i look at you i know who the queen is
its not me or you its my penis
Carmelita, you're the heat ta my world, my support, my walls
i love it when you use your feet to contort my balls
whenever we together you make me warm like piss in swimming pools
i love the way you, suck play and fuck my family jewles
it's cool but be careful, it's fragile like a dry leaf
so whatever you do, just don't use you're teeth
and now im guna fuck you like im the farmer and your the sheep


carmelita when you're wet i want to just undress and caress ya
molest ya and than bust unda pressure and press your nipples against my toungue
and is it your pussy i'm fingering? cause my finger smells like dung!
i'm hung well as you can see andi want to be in you but first, you'll have to put yourself into me

[ThomasAguanis]

hahahahahahahahaa classic
should we do a second verse?

haha
i say we should try to make this a full song. i mean we are just fucking around and already have 1/3 or it done andit didnt take long so i think we can get a full bullshit song out of this for erick haha

[ThomasAguanis]

carmelita this may sound dumb to some
but when you look at me i become numb and unglum
don't even look at my penis..i'm gonna cu...cum!!
as much as i love you CAR-ME-LETA
i prefer to beat of because my PALM IS BETTER
that purple gay font is hard to read
carmeleta come here give my dick a squeeze
when i look at you i know who the queen is
its not me or you its my penis
Carmelita, you're the heat ta my world, my support, my walls
i love it when you use your feet to contort my balls
whenever we together you make me warm like piss in swimming pools
i love the way you, suck play and fuck my family jewles
it's cool but be careful, it's fragile like a dry leaf
so whatever you do, just don't use you're teeth
and now im guna fuck you like im the farmer and your the sheep


carmelita when you're wet i want to just undress and caress ya
molest ya and than bust unda pressure and press your nipples against my toungue
and is it your pussy i'm fingering? cause my finger smells like dung!
i'm hung well as you can see andi want to be in you but first, you'll have to put yourself into me


my balls are spectacular, carmeleta sucking like dracula
on your head you got a spactular, i am the horny bactular
i'm attacking her but her head's immaculate but i still choose to smack her with my cack, my dick
and she's clappin with her tits even though they're misquote bites

[$0 R3@L]

erick...you tell your gf you bang your own dick caus eits better then her...you aint got no gf no more...LMAO

[$0 R3@L]

erick...you tell your gf you bang your own dick caus eits better then her...you aint got no gf no more...LMAO

......screw you this is the greatest wanna pimp song of all time:smoking:

[$0 R3@L]

lmao

even better you should have erick rap it in the skit.....which leads me to ask erick: do you plan on recording raps?

[ThomasAguanis]

carmelita this may sound dumb to some
but when you look at me i become numb and unglum
don't even look at my penis..i'm gonna cu...cum!!
as much as i love you CAR-ME-LETA
i prefer to beat of because my PALM IS BETTER
that purple gay font is hard to read
carmeleta come here give my dick a squeeze
when i look at you i know who the queen is
its not me or you its my penis
Carmelita, you're the heat ta my world, my support, my walls
i love it when you use your feet to contort my balls
whenever we together you make me warm like piss in swimming pools
i love the way you, suck play and fuck my family jewles
it's cool but be careful, it's fragile like a dry leaf
so whatever you do, just don't use you're teeth
and now im guna fuck you like im the farmer and your the sheep


carmelita when you're wet i want to just undress and caress ya
molest ya and than bust unda pressure and press your nipples against my toungue
and is it your pussy i'm fingering? cause my finger smells like dung!
i'm hung well as you can see andi want to be in you but first, you'll have to put yourself into me


my balls are spectacular, carmeleta sucking like dracula
on your head you got a spactular, i am the horny bactular
i'm attacking her but her head's immaculate but i still choose to smack her with my cack, my dick
and she's clappin with her tits even though they're miscitto bites
carmeletas a go getta nobody can ho better once was a lesbian wit antonietta/
she makes my bone better when its throbbing in pain, the temprutures gone but the blisters still remain/
they all look the same but some are oozing and green in complection
and since we're both virgins, there's no sence in using protection

[ThomasAguanis]

carmelita this may sound dumb to some
but when you look at me i become numb and unglum
don't even look at my penis..i'm gonna cu...cum!!
as much as i love you CAR-ME-LETA
i prefer to beat of because my PALM IS BETTER
that purple gay font is hard to read
carmeleta come here give my dick a squeeze
when i look at you i know who the queen is
its not me or you its my penis
Carmelita, you're the heat ta my world, my support, my walls
i love it when you use your feet to contort my balls
whenever we together you make me warm like piss in swimming pools
i love the way you, suck play and fuck my family jewles
it's cool but be careful, it's fragile like a dry leaf
so whatever you do, just don't use you're teeth
and now im guna fuck you like im the farmer and your the sheep


carmelita when you're wet i want to just undress and caress ya
molest ya and than bust unda pressure and press your nipples against my toungue
and is it your pussy i'm fingering? cause my finger smells like dung!
i'm hung well as you can see andi want to be in you but first, you'll have to put yourself into me


my balls are spectacular, carmeleta sucking like dracula
on your head you got a spactular, i am the horny bactular
i'm attacking her but her head's immaculate but i still choose to smack her with my cack, my dick
and she's clappin with her tits even though they're miscitto bites
carmeletas a go getta nobody can ho better once was a lesbian wit antonietta/
she makes my bone better when its throbbing in pain, the temprutures gone but the blisters still remain/
they all look the same but some are oozing and green in complection
and since we're both virgins, there's no sence in using protection
weve never struggled for money cos your queen of prostitution
you unbucle and then suck the dick catch it in the air when they shooting
i'm rooting in the background while in the back of the line
waiting for my turn for her to make my knob shine

[ThomasAguanis]

carmelita this may sound dumb to some
but when you look at me i become numb and unglum
don't even look at my penis..i'm gonna cu...cum!!
as much as i love you CAR-ME-LETA
i prefer to beat of because my PALM IS BETTER
that purple gay font is hard to read
carmeleta come here give my dick a squeeze
when i look at you i know who the queen is
its not me or you its my penis
Carmelita, you're the heat ta my world, my support, my walls
i love it when you use your feet to contort my balls
whenever we together you make me warm like piss in swimming pools
i love the way you, suck play and fuck my family jewles
it's cool but be careful, it's fragile like a dry leaf
so whatever you do, just don't use you're teeth
and now im guna fuck you like im the farmer and your the sheep


carmelita when you're wet i want to just undress and caress ya
molest ya and than bust unda pressure and press your nipples against my toungue
and is it your pussy i'm fingering? cause my finger smells like dung!
i'm hung well as you can see andi want to be in you but first, you'll have to put yourself into me


my balls are spectacular, carmeleta sucking like dracula
on your head you got a spactular, i am the horny bactular
i'm attacking her but her head's immaculate but i still choose to smack her with my cack, my dick
and she's clappin with her tits even though they're miscitto bites
carmeletas a go getta nobody can ho better once was a lesbian wit antonietta/
she makes my bone better when its throbbing in pain, the temprutures gone but the blisters still remain/
they all look the same but some are oozing and green in complection
and since we're both virgins, there's no sence in using protection
weve never struggled for money cos your queen of prostitution
you unbucle and then suck the dick catch it in the air when they shooting
i'm rooting in the background while in the back of the line
waiting for my turn for her to make my knob shine
i hear your suffering from a case of pussy pollotion
but dont worry baby cos i have a curing sulotioun
it'll cause prufusion but it'll be worth the mist
you have to assist so spread your legs wide...here comes my fist

[Erick]

lmao

even better you should have erick rap it in the skit.....which leads me to ask erick: do you plan on recording raps?

Please...I usually skip the skits (except the 'Soldier' one!) and I hate my own voice on any answeringmachine, so I'll stick to scribblin' the usual crap on TRShady. Why? Have a contract to offer?

[ThomasAguanis]

carmelita this may sound dumb to some
but when you look at me i become numb and unglum
don't even look at my penis..i'm gonna cu...cum!!
as much as i love you CAR-ME-LETA
i prefer to beat of because my PALM IS BETTER
that purple gay font is hard to read
carmeleta come here give my dick a squeeze
when i look at you i know who the queen is
its not me or you its my penis
Carmelita, you're the heat ta my world, my support, my walls
i love it when you use your feet to contort my balls
whenever we together you make me warm like piss in swimming pools
i love the way you, suck play and fuck my family jewles
it's cool but be careful, it's fragile like a dry leaf
so whatever you do, just don't use you're teeth
and now im guna fuck you like im the farmer and your the sheep


carmelita when you're wet i want to just undress and caress ya
molest ya and than bust unda pressure and press your nipples against my toungue
and is it your pussy i'm fingering? cause my finger smells like dung!
i'm hung well as you can see andi want to be in you but first, you'll have to put yourself into me


my balls are spectacular, carmeleta sucking like dracula
on your head you got a spactular, i am the horny bactular
i'm attacking her but her head's immaculate but i still choose to smack her with my cack, my dick
and she's clappin with her tits even though they're miscitto bites
carmeletas a go getta nobody can ho better once was a lesbian wit antonietta/
she makes my bone better when its throbbing in pain, the temprutures gone but the blisters still remain/
they all look the same but some are oozing and green in complection
and since we're both virgins, there's no sence in using protection
weve never struggled for money cos your queen of prostitution
you unbucle and then suck the dick catch it in the air when they shooting
i'm rooting in the background while in the back of the line
waiting for my turn for her to make my knob shine
i hear your suffering from a case of pussy pollotion
but dont worry baby cos i have a curing sulotioun
it'll cause prufusion but it'll be worth the mist
you have to assist so spread your legs wide...here comes my fist


carmelita when you're wet i want to just undress and caress ya
molest ya and than bust unda pressure and press your nipples against my toungue
and is it your pussy i'm fingering? cause my finger smells like dung!
i'm hung well as you can see andi want to be in you but first, you'll have to put yourself into me


the first time we made love it was all around your bed room
we did it on your bunk bed and didnt have no headroom
you said boom cause it hurt when i went in you the first time
but you were so tight that it also hurt mine but now when i see you, my dick climbs

[ThomasAguanis]

carmelita this may sound dumb to some
but when you look at me i become numb and unglum
don't even look at my penis..i'm gonna cu...cum!!
as much as i love you CAR-ME-LETA
i prefer to beat of because my PALM IS BETTER
that purple gay font is hard to read
carmeleta come here give my dick a squeeze
when i look at you i know who the queen is
its not me or you its my penis
Carmelita, you're the heat ta my world, my support, my walls
i love it when you use your feet to contort my balls
whenever we together you make me warm like piss in swimming pools
i love the way you, suck play and fuck my family jewles
it's cool but be careful, it's fragile like a dry leaf
so whatever you do, just don't use you're teeth
and now im guna fuck you like im the farmer and your the sheep


carmelita when you're wet i want to just undress and caress ya
molest ya and than bust unda pressure and press your nipples against my toungue
and is it your pussy i'm fingering? cause my finger smells like dung!
i'm hung well as you can see andi want to be in you but first, you'll have to put yourself into me


my balls are spectacular, carmeleta sucking like dracula
on your head you got a spactular, i am the horny bactular
i'm attacking her but her head's immaculate but i still choose to smack her with my cack, my dick
and she's clappin with her tits even though they're miscitto bites
carmeletas a go getta nobody can ho better once was a lesbian wit antonietta/
she makes my bone better when its throbbing in pain, the temprutures gone but the blisters still remain/
they all look the same but some are oozing and green in complection
and since we're both virgins, there's no sence in using protection
weve never struggled for money cos your queen of prostitution
you unbucle and then suck the dick catch it in the air when they shooting
i'm rooting in the background while in the back of the line
waiting for my turn for her to make my knob shine
i hear your suffering from a case of pussy pollotion
but dont worry baby cos i have a curing sulotioun
it'll cause prufusion but it'll be worth the mist
you have to assist so spread your legs wide...here comes my fist


carmelita when you're wet i want to just undress and caress ya
molest ya and than bust unda pressure and press your nipples against my toungue
and is it your pussy i'm fingering? cause my finger smells like dung!
i'm hung well as you can see andi want to be in you but first, you'll have to put yourself into me


the first time we made love it was all around your bed room
we did it on your bunk bed and didnt have no headroom
you said boom cause it hurt when i went in you the first time
but you were so tight that it also hurt mine but now when i see you, my dick climbs
and its not because the pain im scared il suffer on a late night
its that when we finished you rolled over and i found u was a hamaphidite
that ain't right but it didnt bother me none, shit i got more errect
i'm bi so i want pussy and dick now i just gotta select

[Erick]

carmelita this may sound dumb to some
but when you look at me i become numb and unglum
don't even look at my penis..i'm gonna cu...cum!!
as much as i love you CAR-ME-LETA
i prefer to beat of because my PALM IS BETTER
that purple gay font is hard to read
carmeleta come here give my dick a squeeze
when i look at you i know who the queen is
its not me or you its my penis
Carmelita, you're the heat ta my world, my support, my walls
i love it when you use your feet to contort my balls
whenever we together you make me warm like piss in swimming pools
i love the way you, suck play and fuck my family jewles
it's cool but be careful, it's fragile like a dry leaf
so whatever you do, just don't use you're teeth
and now im guna fuck you like im the farmer and your the sheep

carmelita when you're wet i want to just undress and caress ya
molest ya and than bust unda pressure and press your nipples against my toungue
and is it your pussy i'm fingering? cause my finger smells like dung!
i'm hung well as you can see andi want to be in you but first, you'll have to put yourself into me

my balls are spectacular, carmeleta sucking like dracula
on your head you got a spactular, i am the horny bactular
i'm attacking her but her head's immaculate but i still choose to smack her with my cack, my dick
and she's clappin with her tits even though they're miscitto bites
carmeletas a go getta nobody can ho better once was a lesbian wit antonietta/
she makes my bone better when its throbbing in pain, the temprutures gone but the blisters still remain/
they all look the same but some are oozing and green in complection
and since we're both virgins, there's no sence in using protection
weve never struggled for money cos your queen of prostitution
you unbucle and then suck the dick catch it in the air when they shooting
i'm rooting in the background while in the back of the line
waiting for my turn for her to make my knob shine
i hear your suffering from a case of pussy pollotion
but dont worry baby cos i have a curing sulotioun
it'll cause prufusion but it'll be worth the mist
you have to assist so spread your legs wide...here comes my fist

carmelita when you're wet i want to just undress and caress ya
molest ya and than bust unda pressure and press your nipples against my toungue
and is it your pussy i'm fingering? cause my finger smells like dung!
i'm hung well as you can see andi want to be in you but first, you'll have to put yourself into me

the first time we made love it was all around your bed room
we did it on your bunk bed and didnt have no headroom

HE Guys, I just love your input!
But maybe it is a bit too vulgair to actually call a corny rap-love-song (which in the end Carmelita has to hear while thinking 'He's my hero!')....It might just be me...As usual..But do keep going please, it is motivating me to act!

[MuNxMuN]

if you ask me i don't think it's corny or sappy at all i think it's just straight to the point