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A Rape Story (I found this on MySpace

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Postby neha » May 6th, '06, 12:01

it's sad, wish i didn't read it..now im gonna be sad for a while :'(
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Postby Inzanity » May 6th, '06, 13:17

polluted wrote:
For some reason I can see that based on a true story though,


fuck, shit like happens every day...



author you ARE SICK FUCK


hold on hold on the author wrote this to make people realize wats actually happenin' in this world the author isn't sick he/she is just expression the reality of todays world. For all we know this author could've been a rape victim and they could've just wrote this to let people know wat it's like to go through something so horrific
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Postby AspirinE » May 6th, '06, 13:35

Prolly just some emo bitch with a myspace, they have a really good imagination. :D
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Postby Mr. Cookie » May 6th, '06, 13:40

why post this if it's sick and fucked up? I won't read it...never will...
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Postby > Evil _ MoNkEy < » May 7th, '06, 10:52

AspirinE wrote:
> Evil _ MoNkEy < wrote::zipped: if this is made up... the sick fucker who thought of it should be drug in a feild and shot......

y? y did i read this? :'( now i got flashbacks pouring in my head..... this has disturbed old memories i was finally begining to let go........

this poem is a sad monstrosity........



...went to the car i was dead after only one swing


How on earth could this be true.

Do they practice logic in any of ya'll schools?


how could it be true? simple....... i have no fuckin clue. i said if.... keyword IF

and as for if they teach logic in school *shrug* couldnt tell ya.... i dropped out.
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Postby AspirinE » May 7th, '06, 11:00

> Evil _ MoNkEy < wrote:how could it be true? simple....... i have no fuckin clue. i said if.... keyword IF

and as for if they teach logic in school *shrug* couldnt tell ya.... i dropped out.


i was saying that to the people asking if its a true story.
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Postby > Evil _ MoNkEy < » May 7th, '06, 11:03

AspirinE wrote:
> Evil _ MoNkEy < wrote:how could it be true? simple....... i have no fuckin clue. i said if.... keyword IF

and as for if they teach logic in school *shrug* couldnt tell ya.... i dropped out.


i was saying that to the people asking if its a true story.


o :confusion: then y did u quote me? :unsure:
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Postby AspirinE » May 7th, '06, 11:05

> Evil _ MoNkEy < wrote:
AspirinE wrote:
> Evil _ MoNkEy < wrote:how could it be true? simple....... i have no fuckin clue. i said if.... keyword IF

and as for if they teach logic in school *shrug* couldnt tell ya.... i dropped out.


i was saying that to the people asking if its a true story.


o :confusion: then y did u quote me? :unsure:

Well for you to.

I was clearing doubt.
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Postby Inzanity » May 7th, '06, 15:52

Mr. Nation wrote:why post this if it's sick and fucked up? I won't read it...never will...



I posted this because it really got to me and I wanted people to read it and realize just how sick this world is things like this actually happen in the world and we can't just sit back and ignore it just because it hurts too much to acknowledge it
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Postby Tomega » May 7th, '06, 15:59

^^^

so you searched on myspace for "rape" ??

so why dont you post any pictures? or more stories?
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Postby dave » May 7th, '06, 16:28

why the fuck did you post that ok if you wrote it but you didnt
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Postby Inzanity » May 8th, '06, 03:34

Tomega wrote:^^^

so you searched on myspace for "rape" ??

so why dont you post any pictures? or more stories?


no it was posted on a bulletin I didn't search it on myspace some1 posted it on the bulletin
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Postby Inzanity » May 8th, '06, 03:35

dave wrote:why the fuck did you post that ok if you wrote it but you didnt


I never said I wrote it in the first place I said I found it on myspace some1 had posted it as a bulletin
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Postby Infliction » May 9th, '06, 03:47

yo u gotta delete this subject man... i was too scared to read this the first week it was on and just today i skimemd thru it.. yo its fucked up man nobody wants to hear this shit.. TR you gotta take this off.. please
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Postby Inzanity » May 9th, '06, 12:23

plaspp wrote:yo u gotta delete this subject man... i was too scared to read this the first week it was on and just today i skimemd thru it.. yo its fucked up man nobody wants to hear this shit.. TR you gotta take this off.. please



y does he gotta delete it man if u don't wanna read it then don't read it man shit I put it in creative writing for a reason besides if Eminem can talk about killin' his wife then y can't I post something about rape I mean the "Kim" song and the song "97' Bonnie and Clyde" are just as disgustin' as this plus Eminem talks about rape in some of his songs too but yet u have no problem listening to him I hate when people get hypocritical besides it's not like this is the first time I posted something about rape in here I posted a song I wrote about rape way back when I first started being active on this site and people seemed to take interest in it. So back off man.
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