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"Determination" ( Fiasco Day 1)

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Re: "Determination" ( Fiasco Day 1)

Postby ShAdYTiLIDie » Jun 19th, '12, 03:28

@ Crashband yeah I have been trying to do some wordplay and expand my vocabulary a bit more but When I try to think of wordplay nothing really comes to my head, Its just hard to think of things for me I guess haha but I will try to improve on that!

@ Menzo, dang I wish I would have realized that, Thanks for the feed dude.
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Re: "Determination" ( Fiasco Day 1)

Postby ShAdYTiLIDie » Jun 19th, '12, 13:23

Thanks TRex will do!
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Re: "Determination" ( Fiasco Day 1)

Postby CrashBand » Jun 19th, '12, 13:44

ShAdYTiLIDie wrote:Thanks TRex will do!


Ah.

I was wondering the reason ShAdYTiLIDie had 2 full pages of feed
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