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Sicilia Game or Moribun A.K.A Near Death

Moribund A.K.A Near Death
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Postby Enimee » Apr 6th, '07, 02:52

lol das why u gotta love kez dude comes out and jus nails mutha fuckas from no where sometimez yo HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA HAAAAAAAAAa



and as for eh kojack....well lol, rofl, roflol, and omfg that iz jus funny


aspirine wow dude jus wow...if yall good learn to pronounce the english language correctly then sometin like "wnna touch" and "im hot" wouldnt rhyme eh?

things that rhyme with "im hot":
rhyme spot
dime slot
find alot
mind lock
I Jot
pie pot
5 shotz




shit like that





thingz that dont rhyme with "im hot"
wnna touch.....

and maybe im stupid but whatz a lamborghini chain ?


the tempo on dat shit wuz way off...i mean if u meade it audio then i cud see but readin it it soundz maaaad wack no pep shit up if it only soundz hot to u and people who have herd u say it or know how u wud say it...not if itz text anyways









again WOOOOOOWWWWW LOL
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Postby stevethetruth » Apr 6th, '07, 02:54

..man don't quit your day job
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Postby Enimee » Apr 6th, '07, 03:02

no he shud quit hiz day job and go kill himself
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Postby stevethetruth » Apr 6th, '07, 03:03

Enimee wrote:no he shud quit hiz day job and go kill himself

hahaha

wooooooord :worship:
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Postby Kez » Apr 6th, '07, 03:07

I think the idea with Kojack and Coccoa is that they use their audios and audio knowledge to mask the fact that they don't rhyme. They blindfold you with technical jargon (or at least Coccoa does) if you question that it dosen't rhyme, either that or he comes back with the same lame responses as always.

Oh and Enimee, thanks and you're free to diss Aspirine if you want but i think he's alright, and i think he was referring to how Kojack had tried to rhyme it.
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Postby Enimee » Apr 6th, '07, 03:12

not dissin da dude jus sayin hiz judgement wuz a tad off on that lolz
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Postby Inches » Apr 6th, '07, 03:22

AspirinE wrote:mah little donut-gulping-liquid-fat-drinking-chubbychunky <3, you know I iz gon be voten for you in any case. <3



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Postby Tash8 » Apr 6th, '07, 03:30

damn you guys are funny.
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Postby DJ.Parker » Apr 6th, '07, 04:42

Enimee wrote:not dissin da dude jus sayin hiz judgement wuz a tad off on that lolz


maybe Aspirine was trying to be sarcastic :unsure: lol
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Postby JMG » Apr 6th, '07, 04:44

maybe u should suck my dick faggot
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Postby Enimee » Apr 6th, '07, 08:48

Jm SHUT UP



































































































































































pwease?
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Postby C-Game » Apr 6th, '07, 11:13

ummmm wtf is goin on here... :unsure: :unsure:
whos dissin who......

anyway keep ur battles ( if this is a battle lol ) in to da rap battle sectionn

i missed da days where creative writin was used for poems and stuff :'( :'(
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Postby Kez » Apr 6th, '07, 14:59

Nobody's "dissing" anyone, we're just laughing at Kojack and how brilliant he thinks he is
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Postby AspirinE » Apr 6th, '07, 15:14

Enimee wrote:

aspirine wow dude jus wow...if yall good learn to pronounce the english language correctly then sometin like "wnna touch" and "im hot" wouldnt rhyme eh?



I Russian, no spik good english.
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Postby Sophie » Apr 6th, '07, 16:04

am i just being really thick or does the first line not make sense? :unsure:
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