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Postby Rae » Apr 26th, '07, 11:14

TruEmFan wrote:i liked it. the first verse was better than the second, imo... but it was good overall.

and i think you did use a few multies, though i'm not sure you realized it :p


thanks for tha feed. :)

yea i like the 1st verse tha best. i wrote that one while i was talking to my sister. so i was pretty into it. lol

and yea if i did use any multies i didnt realize it. :happy:
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Postby James R. » Apr 29th, '07, 22:42

I sometimes wish you were someone my mom didn
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Postby Rae » Apr 30th, '07, 01:10

James R. wrote:I sometimes wish you were someone my mom didn
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