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Re: NEW - Dead Rose (Revising)

Postby James R. » Nov 28th, '08, 04:40

Not bad man. I like the concept, I like the emotion. Flowed well. Rhymed well. Nothing overly complex which is good because songs with a lot of emotion are always fucked up by complexity. Good vocab. I liked it. Good job.
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Re: NEW - Dead Rose (Revising)

Postby Solace » Nov 28th, '08, 14:11

James R. wrote:Not bad man. I like the concept, I like the emotion. Flowed well. Rhymed well. Nothing overly complex which is good because songs with a lot of emotion are always fucked up by complexity. Good vocab. I liked it. Good job.

Thanks a lot man :y: Glad you liked it, and glad i didnt fuck it up :)
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