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A hot 16 cuz I pop shit mean (Hard Knock Life Beat)

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Re: A hot 16 cuz I pop shit mean (Hard Knock Life Beat)

Postby James R. » Dec 30th, '08, 01:42

Xray wrote:It's cool man, I liked the last line cause you shut those that dickride that track to the extreme up. Love that beat to, so I see where your coming from. Its deep but could be deeper.

Yeah man I've been toying with the thought of making this a whole song, but like you said, so many people dickride that track it really makes me wanna shy away from it.
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Re: A hot 16 cuz I pop shit mean (Hard Knock Life Beat)

Postby Xray » Dec 30th, '08, 01:44

James R. wrote:
Xray wrote:It's cool man, I liked the last line cause you shut those that dickride that track to the extreme up. Love that beat to, so I see where your coming from. Its deep but could be deeper.

Yeah man I've been toying with the thought of making this a whole song, but like you said, so many people dickride that track it really makes me wanna shy away from it.


Fuck the dickriders do your thing on this one man, why settle to shy away when you can piss there bitch ass off. :smoking:
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Re: A hot 16 cuz I pop shit mean (Hard Knock Life Beat)

Postby James R. » Dec 30th, '08, 01:53

Hahahah good point man. Ima see what I can do
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