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"The Murder Scene"

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Re: "The Murder Scene"

Postby Wreck » Feb 1st, '09, 09:44

z_em wrote:it's very good .. i liked the concept . and the flow . rhymes too were pretty good .. nice shit bro .. keep it up .. gd job homie :y: :y:


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Re: "The Murder Scene"

Postby gutawafang » Feb 1st, '09, 14:52

Great topic. :y:
Great rhyming.
I could rap it out. :happy:
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Re: "The Murder Scene"

Postby Wreck » Feb 1st, '09, 20:45

gutawafang wrote:Great topic. :y:
Great rhyming.
I could rap it out. :happy:


Thanks bro. Yeah I do that myself. Rap it act after I'm done structuring the rhyme, so it fits, works and sounds good as well.
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